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for The Cloned

by WotanAnubis

person DrkVrtx
schedule July 18, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Given the way Larissa is characterised, I was wondering why she'd let Catleia titfuck and then come on her, but Catleia's actions afterwards supply the answer. Interesting little moment there with Catleia appearing to change tack and Larissa falling for it, seems that she almost reveals a desire, however small, to live with them ^^
person Streti
schedule May 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Fantastic portrayal of Tabitha's narcissist mindset. And with Tabitha and Isabella dick-equipped and horny, having futanari lesbian incest sex, it's a hot story too! Especially liked the scene of Isabella fucking Tabitha's ample tits and its cumshot. "Deliberately tainting her flawless skin with her semen"... hot stuff, playing off her character and the naughty scene. I keep wishing there was a full-on penetration scene, though. The setting could also be mentioned a few more times, highlighting the open place around them. It's a nice image of the ending when they're lying there together, naked. Something about this story just clicks so well, making it immensely enjoyable.

A few typos in "her sparkling at what she saw" and "making she her lips".
schedule March 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Good Story, entertaining.