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There is a pill for everything! :D .. you should have knocked her up .. then fuck her some more! Ashley is an ideal mother to any unplanned child!

I know its been a while since you updated this story but if you could i would be appreciative.

This was excellent. I found the part where Sarkov rubbed her milk into her face to be especially beautiful!

Poor Ashley, she always gets the shit assignments.Hopefully she can "get off" to better ones.

great story, i usually don't make reviews but this was great. I loved how you described the details so vivedly. please please please update soon. aslo could i request that she is somehow gang-banged by some of her recruits with the big boss guy? it would make it work out so much more. plese update.

That was hot.

I liked it, until you brought lactation into it. XP Then all interest in it died faster than the boner of an unlaid 30 year old straight male who has just witnessed a trio of gay sex in his living room. Not one of your better fics, I'm afraid, and it has nothing to do with the lactation (although I admit, that has something to do with it). You MIGHT consider playing the game through first to get an idea of the characters before ya write a story involving them, cuz Ashley just...meh, the fic version of her and the game version of her just didn't have anything in common except for maybe the name. On a writing POV, it's still pretty good but not quite as innovative as some of your other works. :P

Great story, was everything i'd hope for from it !! Perhaps a little more detail on the anal rape, since that causes the girl the most pain.
I loved the lactating part of it, too .. thats always been very hot and feminine to me.

I'm not sure how many female readers you do get. That's an interesting question. All I know is you have at least one :Raises hand and looks around: I've been reading your writing since the Need For Speed story and I've tried to leave reviews on them as well. You're one of my favorite writers on here!

Since this is a review for a story, I hafta say yet another masterpiece. LOL I just read it for the first time, and I love it. I need to reread it to find any constructive critism, right now I can only say I loved it. I might repost later if I get time, once I've read it a few more times...

That being said, I don't think you're a sick bastard. But if I don't think you're sick, then what does that make me?

K, I'll stop typing now.

This was a heck of a lot of fun. I have never played Mass Effect, but that lack of knowlege certainly did not hinder my enjoyment of this story.