rate_review Reviews

Awesome story I'm so happy you took on my challenge. I would have commented sooner but I haven't been on the site in a while (lack of internet) but honestly thanks for taking up the challenge I can't wait for more!

Wow, I take back what I said about Dante. I just hate his DMC4 personality and yet you managed to combine his DMC1, DMC3 and DMC4 traits into one more or less solid character, coherent and logical. I've been kinda lazy in DMC section lately, but - it's fresh and impressive.
Meh, I can stand such Dante. ^_^
The bit about fears sounded weird at first (Dementors! XD). I like the idea though - especially Dante being able to be afraid - and how the story is progressing. ^^

As for CBT and B-Mod, uh, I'm not really fond of B-Mod, but it's okay as long as it's not too hardcore. ^^ Glad you're taking your time and not rushing into M-rated action!

Hmm... not too bad. I like your style of writing, and you're quite good at portraying both Dante and R.B. Riddick. The only thing that really irks me is the change of perspective and that you occasionally seem to shift from writing in present tense to past tense.
Other than that I think that you've really got something, and this could turn into a really good story. Dante getting turned on by pizza humored me greatly, it strikes me as something that only Dante could be.
A mild question, however, is whether Dante ever got to relieve himself of his problem or if it just went down? From what I have learned it's nothing that just goes 'poof gone' and that if he didn't get to jerk off would have been quite uncomfortable for quite some time; not to mention it being difficult to sleep.
Oh well, this is just me, and I look forwards to seeing more.

Good luck - M

hmm, i like where this is going... a bit jolty in terms of literary style but i see improvement as you go along.
i love the riddick/dante combo, thats pretty cool.
and all in all... hott
well done

Man, I want more now. Nicely done. I don't know Riddick but I feel like I do from the way you're writing.

Hey! I really like this! Awesome job. I wouldn't worry too much about your keeping everyone IC, as far as I've seen, I haven't read anything that made me flinch in disbelief.
There's some serious sexiness goin' on here!
Looking forward to your next update.

Great work thus far! Why aren't you updating?! Do it. Seriously. Good for the health.

Niiiiiiiiiice! ^__^ I hope this one gets continued.

Oh! More please! It's getting good!! I can't wait for more!

This story rocks my socks, and it is much better than the other Riddick/DMC crossover on this site. Please keep on writing!