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April 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Awws, this fic is just so cute. I adore the interactions between Daxter and Dark Jak, and how Dark Jak is totally not acting the way Dax thinks he should be.
And the outtakes are pretty fun, too.
Update soon, please, okay!
And the outtakes are pretty fun, too.
Update soon, please, okay!
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April 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This story is amazing. I love playful Dark Jak! The fact that Daxter wants to cuddle is just setting him up for a full fledged seduction. I can't wait to read that part! Please, please, update!
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March 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Another who has created an account solely to review your story.
I've been through smut after smut, you name it, I've seen it. Yet, here I am blushing madly after reading this. The characterization of dark Jak is just so endearing, and Daxter is just so adorable without being ooc. The way Dax pets him (my favorite part), the longing to be cuddled is so well done, everything fits so well here. It's sweet and enticing at the same time! I love it! Forgive my babbling, good stories usually do that to me.
Can not wait for the next chapter!
I've been through smut after smut, you name it, I've seen it. Yet, here I am blushing madly after reading this. The characterization of dark Jak is just so endearing, and Daxter is just so adorable without being ooc. The way Dax pets him (my favorite part), the longing to be cuddled is so well done, everything fits so well here. It's sweet and enticing at the same time! I love it! Forgive my babbling, good stories usually do that to me.
Can not wait for the next chapter!
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March 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love you outakes espiceally the last one, great story by the way please update soon! :)
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February 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
oh, jak knows what he's doing. he totally knows, and he's liking it!
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February 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Yay another great chapter!! Please update soon, I can hardly stand the wait to see when Dax finally gives in to Jaks “cuddly“ affections.
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February 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love you. Plain and simple. :) My girlfriend read this and at the bit where Dark's purring and being loved on with the scratchy, she turned to me and said, "Hey, he acts just like you! Like a dog or something!" I ADORED this chapter. I think your writing gets better with each one, as impossibly awesome as it is already. Excited for the conclusion! (And chapter 11!)
PS: ;) Looove the second outtake.
Creepy stalker fan love, MJ
PS: ;) Looove the second outtake.
Creepy stalker fan love, MJ
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February 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Chapter two! Oh my GOD, this story makes ME feel warm. Dark is so cute. ;_; What a way to end, though.
The part about Daxter's regrets about transforming seems so on-target. I think it makes a lot of sense that people act differently toward soft and furry animals than they would to that animal's human counterpart. For example, when my sister's cat Alexander was a kitten, he really liked sitting right between her boobs (let's just say she's well-endowed)--and it was adorable! But my sister doesn't greet cute boys by smothering them in between her knockers, so there's a huge difference. I think that Daxter's sentience adds such a dynamic to that loss of contact.
Anyway... Hot 'n' bothered Dax equals hot 'n' bothered Sej, so MORE PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!11!!!1!!eleven :) Thanks for the update.
The part about Daxter's regrets about transforming seems so on-target. I think it makes a lot of sense that people act differently toward soft and furry animals than they would to that animal's human counterpart. For example, when my sister's cat Alexander was a kitten, he really liked sitting right between her boobs (let's just say she's well-endowed)--and it was adorable! But my sister doesn't greet cute boys by smothering them in between her knockers, so there's a huge difference. I think that Daxter's sentience adds such a dynamic to that loss of contact.
Anyway... Hot 'n' bothered Dax equals hot 'n' bothered Sej, so MORE PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!11!!!1!!eleven :) Thanks for the update.
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February 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Another chapter! *dances around happily*
I loved it! It feels like I have absolutely nothing intelligent to say right now but I really loved reading this chapter. Dark Jak is still so adorable and poor Daxter is not getting any attention anymore. Well, I guess it’s a bit strange to pet your human friend. But Daxter doesn’t want to sleep in his own bed, he wants to sleep with you, Jak! I hope he remembers everything that happens when he is turned back to normal.
I’m looking forward to the next chapter!
I loved it! It feels like I have absolutely nothing intelligent to say right now but I really loved reading this chapter. Dark Jak is still so adorable and poor Daxter is not getting any attention anymore. Well, I guess it’s a bit strange to pet your human friend. But Daxter doesn’t want to sleep in his own bed, he wants to sleep with you, Jak! I hope he remembers everything that happens when he is turned back to normal.
I’m looking forward to the next chapter!
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February 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I always found Dark Jak to be an interesting character if fan fiction because he is written in so many ways, from evil and sadistic to mindless and feral, but I have to say I really enjoy the ”loving protective beast” impression that I get from this one. I’m eagerly looking forward to the next chapter and expecting great things!