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for Fool Me Twice

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person Kitsuna
schedule March 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
*wipes drool from mouth* wow, good make out sceen...
person Hollyx
schedule February 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Haha I laughed at the morning sunshine part XD
I must now post art on the 29th just 'cause it only comes around once every 4 years too XDD

I rofl'd when Roxas asked if he should get a tattoo on his face LMFAO it was so retarded XDDD And the same for when Sora was expressing his deep deep deep thoughts XDD I had to hold back my laughing 'cause my cousin would have thought me a retard.

D'aww Roxie is all confused~ I'm off to read more now!
person Hollyx
schedule February 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hahaha XDDD SNOW SKIDOOS!! Lmfao I died when Sora said that lmfao. And when Hayner suggested making a home made 'snow skidoo' lmao XDD
Roxas is really retarded when planning isn't he xD
1,238,176,248,352,015th time XDDDD I laughed so bad when I read that xDDDD!! Roxas' way of describing things is really hilarious sometimes. Haha I loved the comparison of the snowmobiles with the skidoos, yep I bet Roxas felt a WHOLE lot better about it then.
Ahh I wanna see the fanart now >3!! Also I TOTALLY WANNA READ THE NEXT CHAPTER!!! Could you email me when it's up? Otherwise I'll keep checking! Wait, if your planning on finishing this by the 29th then it's only gonna have a few more chapters D: NOOOO!! *sad* Anywho off to find that fanart I gooo~
person Hollyx
schedule February 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Yullo thar! You can leave reviews on here if you don't have an account woot!

Yaay Sora's still as hyper as ever hehe! :3 And I can't wait to hear about why Roxas doesn't want to see Axel so badly!! |D I love how you're setting the fic up so far and so I shall go on ahead and read more!

Also yaay for aff.net stories and sequels |D!!
person Hollyx
schedule February 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ahh I forgot to mention that last review I knew it was Demyx and Marly straight away haha! xD
Some of my friends are away on a ski trip this week, this totally reminds me of it lololol.
Yaaay it's happening again XDDD! *reads on*
person Hollyx
schedule February 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Man I just keep forgetting to mention the things that I want to say in reviews XDD I laughed at the 'Oh God.' part in chapter 2 so bad XDDD It was ever so amusing~

Roxas certainly knows how to make the most out of a skiing holiday now doesn't he? Sitting watching TV all day then spying on Axel! XDD

Haha I laughed at the stupid froth part XDD Poor Ven, it's not his fault he's a freaky clone!

I really want to hear a Roxas war cry now XDD lmfao that would be SO epic.

Wooooh some action!!! xDD I was begining to wonder just how they would get away with anything in a public hotspring, good thing Roxas' brain kicked in... Wait no that bad! D: Stupid Roxas' brain working XDD

HAHAHAHA OMFGLOLOLOLOL XDDDDD THAT WAS THE BEST ENDING EVER TO A CHAPTER!!! Haha I love you for writing such crack! Tommorow I shall read some more~
schedule February 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I finally got around to reading this story this morning, and I really enjoyed it. Not to mention that Roxas walking in on Seifer/Hayner was absolutely hilarious. I can't wait for more.
person Yamichi
schedule February 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Nice job!

I really like this story! I´m looking forward to the 4:th chapter!

Take care and please update as soon as you possibly can!
person pokezejello
schedule February 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
"why areyou always trying to get naked?" XDD best line EVER!!!!heh, idiot box...oh and fruiter than a box of trix!!XXDDD omg awesomechapter. hilarious but also very sexy. I love the plot. I really don't think Sora's stupid and that he somehow planned all the stuff. Sora can be an evil lil bugger and riku's alll laidback jus chillin n whatnot. He's like the epitome of cool. Marluxia is a manly fruit.
person KajaKataMaran
schedule February 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hmpf. I was just about to write you a review on FF.net when the site decided to stop working. But, now I found you over here so you can get your promised dose of flattery after all :D
I had a great time reading this chappie, despite the fact that our two dogs had some kind of wild game of tag going all over the couch, me, and the laptop. See? That if anything should be proof of how much I like your stories, not even a pack of rabid dogs can stop me from reading!!!
Err... Anyway. Amusing to see Roxas finally snap and trow himself at Axel, to bad that he got his senses back. Oh well, he can't fight it forever... *rubs hands in glee*
And about Hayner and Seifer doing the horizontal tango, well, it was only a matter of time before that happened ;3

See you next time! *salut*