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for Fool Me Twice

by Fur

schedule November 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
WHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA!
BEST STORY EVER IN ALL CREATION AND EVERYTHING OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG
YOU ARE THE BEST STORY TELLER EVERY IN THE HISTORY OF FOREVER!
THAT WAS THE MOST PERFECTEST ENDING IN THE WHOLE WIDE WORLD AND I WASN'T SURE YOU WERE GOING TO DO IT AND YOU DID DO IT AND IT WAS THE BEST AND OH GOSH! AXELxROXAS LOVVEE LOVEE FOREVER!!!!!!!!!
schedule May 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Really awesome story. it was just so sweet. Good job.
person pokezejello
schedule March 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
okay i feel ultimatly too girly, i can't stop squealing at how romantic and happy and cute it all is!!!i love these kinda stories! i can't believe it ended so soon though.. will you write other kh fics? write one about sora n riku!! cus i still don't understand their relationship!!!did u know sugar makes u older faster???
person pokezejello
schedule March 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
oh and also...wtf is a snow skidoo???i thought it was called a snowmobile??? >.<
person pokezejello
schedule March 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
oh and also...wtf is a snow skidoo???i thought it was called a snowmobile??? >.<
person SuicialTreefrog
schedule March 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
that was a great story!!i lovvveveeeddd it!!!keep up the good workiness!!
schedule March 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Make mine Akuroku, with a dash of Ven/Terra on the side! Oh, sweetness beyond sweetness, this was friggin' adorable. An utterly satisfying fic that I hate to see end, but end it must. Topped off with a happily ever after, amen!

Now where's the hot chocolate?
person SoWeird
schedule March 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OMG They did the smex! Love it! I especially loved the little clearing up spat they had, iunno why but I thought how they resolved the conflict was much more realistic then "Omg why don`t you love me!?" "I love you i do! Let`s smex!" So yes, goodness :D
schedule March 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hehe...it may have taken some building up to, but that's realistic. And well worth the wait it was. The Scene of Scenes was so *perfect*, who wouldn't want their first time to be that sweet?

Sleep the sweet sleep of lovers, guys. You've earned it. *Mops up drool off keyboard*

person Nao
schedule March 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Yes I enjoyed what you wrote. -parties- And thaaaank you <3 ily so much for it. Continue soon pleeeease~