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November 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
ok i really need an account here :P but any way OMG SMEXY SEX XD hehe very vewry good end to the story
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November 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OWWWWW i got included in a note cool hehe thank ye any way OOOW HOT SCENE now me need sleep so can dream the scene :P
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September 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
*stares blankly at the screen* ...not nice...dude... I was so all like "YAY JAK/DAX SMUT" and then...nothing. Anywhom I can't wait for the update...I loooves this ficcy ^^
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August 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
ASSFOBHOEWIH!!!! OoO
Update soon; don't leave me hanging for months please! This story rules!
Update soon; don't leave me hanging for months please! This story rules!
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August 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
YOU BIG TEASE!!
I demand hawt hawt Greeny-Blond and Redhead naughtyness!
I can't wait for the next chapter...you evil girl. xD
I demand hawt hawt Greeny-Blond and Redhead naughtyness!
I can't wait for the next chapter...you evil girl. xD
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August 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
BAD PLACE NOTHING THAT SCENE WAS HOT TOWARDS THE END I SEE SEX NEXT CHAPPY :P XD
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August 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh man....Cliffhanger of doom!
I love how you write lil Dax, he is so cute and I love his reactions towards Jak...though I wouldn't mind jusr readubf some Jak on Dax smut! xD
I really hope you have Jak coming to save lil Dax from himself or something. I love when they hug...every time I read them hugging it makes me wanna hug my boyfriend. X3
Really can't wait for the update...been awhile now...Guess I'll have to wait like everyone else.
Branny~<3
I love how you write lil Dax, he is so cute and I love his reactions towards Jak...though I wouldn't mind jusr readubf some Jak on Dax smut! xD
I really hope you have Jak coming to save lil Dax from himself or something. I love when they hug...every time I read them hugging it makes me wanna hug my boyfriend. X3
Really can't wait for the update...been awhile now...Guess I'll have to wait like everyone else.
Branny~<3
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July 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Great story. I really love how you did Daxter's personality.
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June 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wowwie. Usually, this kind of thing would make me extremely sad, but I'm glad that Daxter avoided being raped. I'm looking forward to seeing Jak's reaction if and when Dax tells him the full extent of what happened. It was very well written--nothing pulled me out of the moment at any point in this chapter. Good job.
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June 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OMG I missed some chapter updates.
If I were better at english I could probably
wrte something really smashing on how awsome
this story is but alas you hav3e to settle with
just this. I love this story it's so good and
well written. Poor little Daxxie but ohhhh
it's just soo good. As I said earlier...
Really good reviewer... Love to see where
this is going and it's really thrilling.
If I were better at english I could probably
wrte something really smashing on how awsome
this story is but alas you hav3e to settle with
just this. I love this story it's so good and
well written. Poor little Daxxie but ohhhh
it's just soo good. As I said earlier...
Really good reviewer... Love to see where
this is going and it's really thrilling.