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by ladykasai

person _WM_
schedule October 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I remember reading this somewhere else and absolutely falling in love with it. A few months down the track, I find it here and can't help but fall in love with it all over again.
Phoenix and Miles are such great characters and when someone can write about affection between while adhering to their proper characteristics, it is just purely fantastic to read.
I will just run over to FF.net and read some more of your stuff now. ;D
person Coh
schedule August 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I loved this! It was adorable and realistic all in the right areas, and I was caught up reading it. Keep up the good work!
person Ashley
schedule July 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I loved it!
person Kaiyuke
schedule May 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Fantastic <3
person KK
schedule April 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
You know what I really liked about this story? You kinda turned that whole seme/uke cliche inside out. You practically made that cliche your bitch! Both Phoenix and Miles had their moments of insecurity and confidence, and they were written as equals. I really appreciate that.
schedule March 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Awww! This was so cute! I really liked it! :D
person xDavyn
schedule February 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
That was absolutely adorable! You did a great job making the transition of their relationship seem natural. The story flows well, too. <3 Fantastic!