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for A Devil's Heart

by PerireAnimus

person Secrets
schedule January 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I really love this story so far and I know I will love it all the way until the end, then I will beg for you to do more. Lol. The smexy parts are awsome, I have a total visual on what is happening. <3333 Loves It.
schedule January 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I loved this chapter too, My my all this lovin' and I still haven't had a cigarette. LOL. You are very discriptive and you create images in my head when I read, Like as if I can see what it going on. Very few creative writers can do that to me. Kudos to this chapter and the last, this story is coming along beautifully.

-Secrets
schedule January 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love this story and I know I will continue to love it again and again, like a lover....who loves something very much. Lol. Keep up the good work, you are very creative and very discriptive. I can't wait for the more...'Juicy' parts...

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~Secrets