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for Near Misses

by truemiang

person animekid
schedule January 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
that was very played into the game and cute

I love the background when they were kids the most; poor poor young children in love

still a good sweet and sometimes smexy piece XD Nick's nervousness is really cute~
person Kaiyuke
schedule May 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Absolutely lovely.
I adored how things were mostly partially implied and how the story guides the readers to think about what is not being said (rather than what is written).
Love. :3
schedule February 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Awww, that was beautifully done, subtle and sweet without being over the top. Very in character as well! You've done an excellent job portraying them both and how they both might just miss each other. The writing is top notch and the dialogue feels wonderfully natural and unforced, all in all a wonderful fan fic experience, thank you for writing!