rate_review Reviews

I absolutely love your stories, Streti. Please, please make another chapter of this. I'd love to see a nice, long Haswar flashback. ^~

I told you this already, but Chapter 5 is a most welcome addition. The wait was worth it.

The contrast between the more enclosed, tightly-knit feeling of the first four chapters and the more open, fleeting behavior in the fifth chapter is a delight. The shift in focus to Sialeeds is enormously enjoyable in its own right, but as a buildup and lead-in to additional kink in future chapter it becomes even more tantalizing. I still think this is one of your all-time best stories, and chapters like this reinforce that belief.

A true surprise and delight. Excellent job.

Well, I'll write this because you just plain don't get reviewed enough. I though this chapter was okay. It wasn't great, but it wasn't bad by any means.

I did like the wine drinking, the neat subversion of the usual "How do you want me to pay?" routine, and the storekeeper and his restrained and caring reaction to the lovely Miss Sialeeds, but the rest of it was just too short and pedestrian to get aroused to.

In short, while I didn't hate this chapter, I do feel it could have been better. Please don't get mad. I only wanted to give out some constructive criticism instead of plopping down a quick "OMFG soo hawt I CAEM!"

Also, I think cloth should have been clothes in the first few paragraphs, though what you've go works well too.

Alright, how much do I have to shell out for you to continue this story? It's too good to end with a teaser.

Also, the prince/arshtat/sialeeds idea would be awesome.

Oh my God please keep this story going. You are my hero.

Seriously, nobody writes like you.

Please continue this. Teasing us with Sialeeds is too much and I do hope the prince takes his aunt up on her previous offer 1st.

What are the chances of you doing a Prince x Arshtat x Sialeeds only scene?

"TO BE CONTINUED..?"

Please do so. I look forward to another round of your writing with Sialeeds' participation.

Thanks for the reviews! This fourth chapter turned out a little differently than even I thought, actually. It might feel somewhat different because it has description at the cost of action. In this way it's shorter on progression and fuller on detail. Indeed, hopefully the long-lasting stamina of the Falenan royal males will be enough to see them through a fifth chapter...

Haswar I don't think will be appearing... in this story.

Wow, you really did manage to top the previous chapters in terms of raunchyness. Yet I find it less intense in a strange way. The opening is something else as the queen certainly takes advantage of her position. The desire and tension between Arshtat and Faroush is yet again beautifully displayed when he masturbates in front of her. Despite it is only a small part of the story it's still among the hottest moments in it so far. Nice messy cumshots as always and the finale is superb! Can't wait for another chapter where my only concern is if there's any spunk left for Syaleeds.

I really liked the Haswar reference and it makes me curious about the possibility of her appearing aswell. Despite Arshtat's unknown date of birth she's supposedly not that much older. After all it's only 2 years between Haswar and Ferid. ;)

I was a little worried that you might get into some gay stuff, but it turns out I worried for nothing. Great chapter, and I love your descriptions of Arshtat and Lyon.