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for Accidental Infatuation

by crymsonpassion

schedule April 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OOooh, I love it, I love it, I love it!

Seriously, this is one of the best AU fics I've read in a while. Looking forward to your next update!
person queenaoshi
schedule April 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Damn Axel and his bad timing! Please write more!
person pokezejello
schedule March 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
aww ur too cute! I wish I had a twin!I really enjoy reading this story! Axel is great, he's always so quirky n Demy....word of the day?...NERDNESS! but lovin it =]]]]]] Get roxas in there already!!I wanna know so bad wuts gunna happen between him and axel. Is riku gunna b blind forever?
person Ed
schedule March 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Can I state that I love this fic? And, the way you describe people too ("Blitzball on steroids. Lots of steroids.") It's so funny!
person Kitsuna
schedule March 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
NYUUUUUUU!! that's like, forever away, I cry.
schedule March 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I'm becoming cemented in my belief that your Axel is too crude...unless that's inentionally part of this universe. But the story is still strangely addicting, so you won't lose a reader because of that.
person Roxas13
schedule February 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
*pitchfolks yo ass*

No fair leaving it off there... >.<
person pokezejello
schedule February 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
nuuuuuuuu!!! >.< what happened to Sora????? I like guys like Axel too...nice long legs...lean...awesome hair...okay stopping now. I can't believe you did this to us! you...you...CLIFFHANGERERER!!! =.= it was a good chappy though =D Man i am hyper n perky all day besides mornings, demyx just took it to the EXTREME. I'm glad you made him so perky though, makes the fic seem well, happier? I dunno I can't really find the word for it...but it makes it seem like it's gunna be alright. I'm excited that you put out another chapter but like, hej, don't stress yourself trying to write. If people bother you about tell em to get a life cus theres a world outside of the computer. OMG rly, nowaysss!!123!! Uh, ja, rly. =D I'm also wondering if at these places, isn't there a lot of abuse towards these people and neglect by the staff/maintenance crew? or is that just a rumor?
schedule February 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 2

This is the first well-written, thought-out, GOOD fanfic I've found in two days searching of AFF. And then I find out it's not finished? TT___TT That's just not fair!! I have to find out what'll happen later. Update it soon, okay?
person pokezejello
schedule January 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
a lotta of my friends have been/ still are in rehab or and asylum. people aways come up to me asking "why are you friends with *insert name here*.....they're so weird." i hate that... why would i ever abandon my friends when they need me the most?ive never went to rehab or an asylum or anything really. Well my parents made me go to a psychologist. To this day i don't know WHY. I don't drink smoke or get into trouble... ANYWAY, this story is fun. I love the personalities you gave the characters cus they seem like regular teens. The flow of your story is great! So smooth and it pulls you in ya know? Dude, some blind lady wacked me with her cane and i said "You did that on purpose!!!" she just smiled and walked away(i shudda taken her stupid super metal cane of steel...=_= ). I volunteered at a nursing home. why do i keep talkin about my self? im so me -centric. im kidding, im bored. so stick to this story PLEASE.