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June 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
@Roakin2000
1)This idea for this story first came to me when I watched Alien 3 and Alien Resurrection years ago. In both these movies, Ripley was pregnant with a Xenomorph queen (she killed herself along with the queen an the end of Alein 3 but her DNA was cloned to bring her and the unborn queen back for Resurrection). Metroid has always had a few stylistic similarities with Alien, so the first thing that popped into my mind was "What if something like this happened to Samus?" Metroid Rebirth is my answer.
2)Yes, the Senate Hall is a direct rip-off of the one seen in the Star Wars prequels.
3)Dr. Dalton is an original character, though I got his name from the would-be King of Zeal from Chrono Trigger. Why? Because Chrono Trigger is awesome.
4) That would be telling.
5) The events of Metroid Fusion do figure heavily in the plot, but that DNA fusion was only the beginning of Samus' "problem".
@Everyone else
My efforts to write this story as I had outlined a few posts above have been stymied by real life. But work is continuing, just much slower than I would like. I haven't forgotten this story. The good news is while I haven't been able to write very much, I have been able to plot it out in my head better, so hopefully I wont need a beta process to keep the storyline coherent. This means chapter released wont have to wait until I finish the whole thing.
See this space for further details.
Thanks to everyone for their kinds words. I wont let you down.
1)This idea for this story first came to me when I watched Alien 3 and Alien Resurrection years ago. In both these movies, Ripley was pregnant with a Xenomorph queen (she killed herself along with the queen an the end of Alein 3 but her DNA was cloned to bring her and the unborn queen back for Resurrection). Metroid has always had a few stylistic similarities with Alien, so the first thing that popped into my mind was "What if something like this happened to Samus?" Metroid Rebirth is my answer.
2)Yes, the Senate Hall is a direct rip-off of the one seen in the Star Wars prequels.
3)Dr. Dalton is an original character, though I got his name from the would-be King of Zeal from Chrono Trigger. Why? Because Chrono Trigger is awesome.
4) That would be telling.
5) The events of Metroid Fusion do figure heavily in the plot, but that DNA fusion was only the beginning of Samus' "problem".
@Everyone else
My efforts to write this story as I had outlined a few posts above have been stymied by real life. But work is continuing, just much slower than I would like. I haven't forgotten this story. The good news is while I haven't been able to write very much, I have been able to plot it out in my head better, so hopefully I wont need a beta process to keep the storyline coherent. This means chapter released wont have to wait until I finish the whole thing.
See this space for further details.
Thanks to everyone for their kinds words. I wont let you down.
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May 31, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Finsh the story please!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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May 31, 2008 at 12:00 AM
You the more I read over the frist two chapters you made, the more questions I want to ask you not about the story and how it ends but more of the basic questions.
Frist of chorse should be want gave you the idea to come up with this story? This one really stands out amoung the others.
Second the grand hall of the Galactic Senate, did you design it to be alot like the one from the Star War Movies?
Thrid who is Doctor Dalton? Is he a person you made up or is he from one of the over games?
Fourth when she becomes Queen of the Metroids does she have any new powers?
Finally was it the Metroid DNA that was put into her from Metroid Fusion cause her to become the Queen of the Metroid or is there more to it then that?
Well that's all I got to ask and I look foward to seeing how it all turns out. Keep at it man
Peace.
Frist of chorse should be want gave you the idea to come up with this story? This one really stands out amoung the others.
Second the grand hall of the Galactic Senate, did you design it to be alot like the one from the Star War Movies?
Thrid who is Doctor Dalton? Is he a person you made up or is he from one of the over games?
Fourth when she becomes Queen of the Metroids does she have any new powers?
Finally was it the Metroid DNA that was put into her from Metroid Fusion cause her to become the Queen of the Metroid or is there more to it then that?
Well that's all I got to ask and I look foward to seeing how it all turns out. Keep at it man
Peace.
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May 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I agree with all the comments posted above. Needs a bit of work on the grammar, however all in all a very good story. I simply cannot wait until the next chapter is out.
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May 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
like it continue
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May 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Come on bro... I don't mean to rush but you said you would have the story ready by may. I've been waiting four for this.
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May 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I agree with puppitmazter17 I don't want to rush but I've been really looking forward to see the end of this story. Pretty much all the other stories suck, either she raped, killed, or raped and killed. I mosty don't read the Metroid fanfics on adultfanfiction, but yours really caught my eye and I hopefully like to see it laid out to the end.
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April 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Interesting story, I want to see how Samus became the person who entered the senate building and who the other two women accompanying her are. But I can't help but think Samus as the new Metroid Queen wouldn't let her children attack humans.
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April 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
like it please continue
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April 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
like it please continue