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for Metroid: Rebirth

by TarnishTear

schedule July 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I don't know if still reads these or if you even care, but I don't know if you've seen but I remade your story since you never finshed yours. Someone said I should have ask you frist before posting and he was right but I don't know how to get a hold of you other then this. So anyway read and tell me what you think and if you think I should continue.
schedule February 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
How many babies is Samus going to give birth to? Will her children have two mommies? That would be very cute, aliens with two mommies. Hooray for lesbian mothers.

Please finish this up. I just can't hold my breath much longer.
person Roakin2000
schedule December 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Dude i don't know if you even read these anymore, but It's been a YEAR since you started this story and I really wanted to see the end of it but ut looks like your never going to do that so I give up I anit going to look for anymore. Kudos to you for making a great story but you just never got around to finsh it. Have a good life and God bless.
person puppitmazter17
schedule December 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Dido on what Roakin2000 said. Later!
person puppitmazter17
schedule October 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Com on dude I wan to see the end of this story before the economy collapses.
person True Metroid fan
schedule August 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
When are the others Chapters coming out? We've been waiting for ages, are you working on them write now? Why arnt you doing them now? Do you hate us or something? Could you at least give us a preview of what's to come?
person Anon
schedule August 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
PLEASE Finish!!!!!!!!!! This is a work of art and you should definitely continue bringing in new material. I am now and forever shall be a loyal fan to you^_^
person The Crystal Alchemist
schedule July 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Quite an interesting scenario you have there. Samus the whore...not the most appealing image, but, considering the transformation she's going through not at all unbelievable. It was interesting how you put the story line of where Samus comes from and how she is destine to become this. She is a woman who lost everything at such a young age so she sets out on the path of vengeance, but in the end caused genocide to a species that was just a pawn to the real enemy. In the end she not only redeems herself for what she has done, but also regains the one thing she has lost so long ago. The image where she has become the Queen of the Metroid show her transcending to almost a goddess like state. In all quite an enjoyable fic, although I prefer the romance genre. Hope the epilogue is as great as the prologue.
Kudos to you my friend!
person jusenkyo
schedule July 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
when are you going to update this
person JustS
schedule June 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Glad to see you are still working on this and in touch with your fans.

Can't wait to see what the future holds for this story :)