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for Celsius's Test

by WotanAnubis

person Rising.Phoenix
schedule December 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow, if this is something you're not sure you're satisfied with, I must be easily pleased. (Of course, maybe the whole futa being a personal fave of mine may have helped...)

If you're planning more, I look forward to it. I kinda wonder what the other Summon Spirits would say though. :P
person Streti
schedule December 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I thought the story was good, it has a sort of natural flow in it in Sheena and Raine's somewhat reserved behavior. The futa and the great cumshot scene don't hurt, of course. I'd wager you're planning continuation, to have Celsius join them or at least Sheena... supposing it's possible. Makes me want to try out the game.
schedule December 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Yay! A new fic up here. Wow, that was...interesting^_^ I expected Sheena to become a guy completely, but not both a girl and guy combined O_o If you want to make things odd, Raine could have a kid between her and Sheena.

person KuraiD
schedule December 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Do my eyes deceive me? A yuri piece from WotanAnubis, in the ToS section? O:

For a quickie, it was quite hot and nicely done. There was a word missing, "Raine couldn't noticing"- I think you need a 'help'. Otherwise, lovely fic.

Also props for the Summon Spirits' casual chatting; Naughty Celsius. And Volt at the end was hilarious. ♥ Hoping to see more from you! (And some updates from the FE section, if not too much asked?)