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for In Her Mind

by galassia

person yotan
schedule January 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I liked the first chapter, it was very erotic. But the second chapter didn't hold up as well.
person JustS
schedule December 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I'm not normally interested in solos but you made this one a worthy read. Perhaps the reveal that she was fantasising could have come a bit further toward the end, but still an excellent piece of work.
schedule December 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This came out really well! Can't wait to see how your yuri will come out... if you do one.