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April 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oh my god...that was seriously the hottest thing I've ever read on this site.
Your writing is dark, flawless, and so richly, morbidly detailed that I couldn't pull myself away.
Reading this (the sex scene with the zombies) was like a horror movie and highly erotic experience blended into one.
Wow, I don't think I've ever read anything so twisted, but bloody hell I loved it so much. It's very clever that Wesker's
the guy "behind the scenes" like the shady bastard he is, and hilarious that he's such a pervert and is whacking off to Jill getting gangbanged by the living dead. You should write a sequel to this where Jill and Claire pull a trick on Wesker, steal his lab, and lock HIM in a room full of sexy-crazed zombies that want to fuck his brains out lol. That would be so hot...
Anyways, enough of my creepy fantasies, I applaud you for this brilliant series (oh, and by the way, the title "Primevil Urges" kicks ass). Keep on writing, you've got one hell of an awesome talent!
Love,
Miss Sinful
Your writing is dark, flawless, and so richly, morbidly detailed that I couldn't pull myself away.
Reading this (the sex scene with the zombies) was like a horror movie and highly erotic experience blended into one.
Wow, I don't think I've ever read anything so twisted, but bloody hell I loved it so much. It's very clever that Wesker's
the guy "behind the scenes" like the shady bastard he is, and hilarious that he's such a pervert and is whacking off to Jill getting gangbanged by the living dead. You should write a sequel to this where Jill and Claire pull a trick on Wesker, steal his lab, and lock HIM in a room full of sexy-crazed zombies that want to fuck his brains out lol. That would be so hot...
Anyways, enough of my creepy fantasies, I applaud you for this brilliant series (oh, and by the way, the title "Primevil Urges" kicks ass). Keep on writing, you've got one hell of an awesome talent!
Love,
Miss Sinful
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April 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
You should really make a sequel to this story dealing with RE3 since you dont like RE2...this was practically the best work in this section please dont end it here man, i know you can come up with more genius material. consider this a challenge/request
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February 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hahahahaha!! Wesker's gonna have a promotion!! :D
Hell...you have a lot of imagination..or maybe fantazies??? ;)
Hell...you have a lot of imagination..or maybe fantazies??? ;)
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January 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
your dialogue was really good nothing wrong with it... so a good ending to a great fic case officially closed .... but a pity you dont like RE2 its actually my favorite of all the original RE games
hmmm... so you like jill ..well then you can side step RE2 and just go straight to RE3 which happens during the events of RE2 so it really doesnt matter...you can still involve some creatures from RE2 like lickers, MR X and the mutated william birkin since theyre all in the same time frame and having jill as the main character should please you( and everyone else) and who knows you could have jill meet claire as a replacement for rebeccca .. cmon claire isnt that bad... with the story of RE3 you should have an even larger and more interesting cast of creatures
coff coff.. nemesis...ahem ...then again youre the writer i cant force you to do aything you decide what and how you wanna do it.. at this point it doesnt matter it'll still be good
hmmm... so you like jill ..well then you can side step RE2 and just go straight to RE3 which happens during the events of RE2 so it really doesnt matter...you can still involve some creatures from RE2 like lickers, MR X and the mutated william birkin since theyre all in the same time frame and having jill as the main character should please you( and everyone else) and who knows you could have jill meet claire as a replacement for rebeccca .. cmon claire isnt that bad... with the story of RE3 you should have an even larger and more interesting cast of creatures
coff coff.. nemesis...ahem ...then again youre the writer i cant force you to do aything you decide what and how you wanna do it.. at this point it doesnt matter it'll still be good
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January 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Umm... where is Chapter 20? Because all I'm seeing there is that author's note you put up before the actual chapter, and the epilogue is already up, so I'm a bit confused here.
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January 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oookaaaay....so...definitely not the ending I was expecting. Plus, you didn't post chapter 22. You just totally left it out. I was definitely wondering how you would do an RE2 follow-up, since I too despise Ada Wong, even if her name is perfect for porn, and one of the other main female characters is TWELVE. Though...by my name I can guess you will realize that I am a fan of Claire...
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January 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
well this is probably the best RE fic ive read so far(ive read alot in AFF) so you deserve it.. to tell you the truth its strange that you havent gotten tons of reviews guess everyone gave up on this section before your fic was posted...dont blame em this place is literally a desert with all the same nonsense with your your fic plus a couple others being exceptions however none have had as many chapters as yours or have even updated as fast as you which kinda impressed me.......i pray to god you EVENTUALLY continue this fic with an RE2 fic with a similar format you know lots of chapters exploring all the creatures RE2 offers... i said eventually because i know you must be tired and need a break from a 20 chapter fic so go ahead stretch your legs kick back for a while if you want just please continue it in lets say a month or maybe two max
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January 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Okay, at first I wasn't thrilled with this idea, but now you've reeled me in. I can't wait to see what's waiting for the girls at the end of this fic.
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January 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
...the chimeras!!! man that would be interesting to see, wonder what their reaction wil be... LOL
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January 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
so..were finally down to the tyrant really cant imagine what its going to be like...and does this reference to ada/RE2 mean you will eventually continue the story with an RE2 fic( with same format)