rate_review Reviews

I think this story is top notch...I hope you add the next chapter soon.

That was a pretty tough chapter but you handled it nicely. It was as beautifully written as the others and I liked how you portrayed how she was thinking and the influence her mother had on the way she thinks. I also like how you portray nightelves and don't rely on the popular stereotype of them being sex maniacs who rip their gear off at any opportunity (like I do, but I've already admitted Im lazy in that regard heh night elves and paladins, my favourite cop out!)

And...that was a really nice touch with the shaman, even though he doesn't have any allegance to her as such, he is obviously bound by some kind of laws. I love angst but sometimes it can be overwhelming when there is no relief. You've balanced it all nicely. Hanging for the next chapter! :D

It seems we have a new arrival... and this one's kung-fu is strong.

Seeing Sasari so inept and weak in the outset, I can only wonder what she has the chance of turning into later, weather she pulls herself out of her depression or just falls back and wallows in it all emo-like. Personally, I hope it's the former; call me a sucker for just retribution, if you like.
I'm fond of the level of descriptiveness you use, even if it just makes me feel even worse for the poor girl, and it helps lend some credibility to the Horde's actions, to boot; the troll seems like a second-in-command, I'd guess, judging by how he looks out for Kern's property.

In short: Good stuff, want more please.

Man...that was sooooo sad! I swear my heart was racing when Sasahri and her mother were fighting, her poor mum...poor girl for that matter...poor cat even! I was held enthralled for the entire chapter. Beautiful, imagery and everything, i love the story (my orc fetish and all that) Can't wait for more!

Oh ye gods, MORE. I love orcs and N/C, and cannot wait for the next installment of this story. I do hope yo don't make a girl wait too long... =) Tee hee.