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for Control

by Valiant

schedule November 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Yay, I told you people would like this!

Thanks a lot for the plug xx.
person Mark Vestibule
schedule November 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Good story, not really much else to say! The only tangible thing I could think of changing is easing off the ellipses. I don't know much else to say since I'm used to my own style of writing, so asking you to change it would just be to make it sound like something I wrote. Keep up the good work, soldier!
person omega13
schedule November 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I'm guessing that Ada Wong would rather be somewhere on the field, eh?

This is a very interesting setting for one of the baddest characters CAPCOM has ever created and would love to see where it is going.