rate_review Reviews

one word and yet the emotion is there. damn that makes a good story. well done

ths was pretty cute, but I have a lil' problem with the sintax (or whatever it's spelled).

Basically, there were places who *could* have needed a period. As it is now, it can be a bit hard to follow, but it doesn't feel like semi-coherent rambling I'd expect from Dax...

Yeah, I'm not sure what I wanted to say here. Basically, it's not organized enough to be coherent monologue, but it's not rambling enough to be... Realistic, maybe?

That's only my opinion on how it could be improved though. I'm not claiming to be a genius, and it's still a great story.

Good story... Are you gonna do a Before Precursor Legecy Story?

Aww.. Very sweet. I could so picture this happening because hey, every strong guy needs a hug or the shoulder to lean on sometimes.

Cute! Your story is touching (no pun intended). It's nice to see a little life injected into this fandom. Your characters are dead on, and you've managed to carefully straddle the line between friendship and lurv. That said, it's the perfect set-up for a sequel. >.> Maybe I'm just too perverted these days. Anyway, I hope you write something else sometime, because I'd be happy to read it.