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April 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Dude, awesome so far! I want to read more; there is a critcally small lack of Rune Factory stuff out there... Could we see some Rosetta or Tabitha action, soon? *grin*
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December 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Lulz, liked your comment at the end of chapter 2. xDD
I was impressed you went as far as to go verbatim in the first part of the story. Gave me a nostalgic feeling from playing the game. =3
Grammar, punctuation, and spelling are among your main flaws. It sometimes made the story a little on the eyes. I like the concept, though, and find your story interesting, though any real lack of explanation does tend to irk me a little. But like you said, just watch an h-vid. xDD I want to see moar chapters!! =D
-Narshe 'Dizzy Gear' Delvar-
I was impressed you went as far as to go verbatim in the first part of the story. Gave me a nostalgic feeling from playing the game. =3
Grammar, punctuation, and spelling are among your main flaws. It sometimes made the story a little on the eyes. I like the concept, though, and find your story interesting, though any real lack of explanation does tend to irk me a little. But like you said, just watch an h-vid. xDD I want to see moar chapters!! =D
-Narshe 'Dizzy Gear' Delvar-
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November 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
FINALLY!! I've been waiting for a Rune Factory lemon! Good writing skills. It's a bit odd how direct they are, but it's not a problem. Please, don't let this story die! And update real soon!