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I'm either a noob (possible) and can't figure out how to edit a review, or there's no option. Eh, well. Two reviews then as an addendum to the first.

Tanner = Mage. Totally can see him abusing frost powers to torment an unsuspecting elf into getting a shared bed.

...then there's all the interesting shapes you can make with ice...

Also, every story can use some hard-core sex in their romance. :D

Wow, this was truly an amazing find! Very rarely does a story pull me in so instantly and keep me enthralled until the very last word. The tale, the setting, and the characters are so richly described in lush, careful script I felt every moment of it. The relationship between Tanner and Daelen is written with such effortless deftness it's delightfully real and engaging. They are two very unique characters and I found myself truly happy to see them find each other. It was profoundly romantic, sexy, and heartwarming all at once and I thoroughly enjoyed your story from the first word to the last.

Oh my, I loved this. Your characters have such personality to them! Your descriptions are so vivid that it all plays in my head. (And what a play it is :D) One of my favorite WoW stories ever. Thank you!

Oh, lawd, this is full of WIN. So well-written and sexyyy.

Oh my. That was a very wonderful read. Tanner is such a sneak! I would say rogue for sure (safe fall!). I'm sad that this hasn't been updated more. I hope not a one-shot! :(
One of the better written stories I have read here in a very long time. It definitely didn't seem rushed or too slow in areas. I think it started out well to get people interested in the characters in order to read more. Truth be told, I skimmed until something caught me, then I scrolled back up to read from the start. I really like how it kept true to the races.
Moar kplzthx.

I actually knew what art from Y! that was XD Actually really lovely--a good mix of porn and real emotion! If there were favorites here I'd fave (its prolly on y! somewhere?)

I picture Tanner as a Warrior and Daelen as a Hunter. It just seems to fit like that in my mind. Great story regardless of Class.

I vote mage! Tanner is cheeky, cocky and good natured. I've always found rogues are a little too full of themselves :P

Absolutely wonderful! A real pleasure to read; such vivid descriptions, I particularly loved the way you captured the feel of the forests around Westfall, exactly the way I would imagine them to be. I feel you gave the story a well-maintained balance between romance and the erotic; this is definitely not just a 'porn without a plot'. Daelan's thoughts and speech make everything that happen to him more meaningful.

The only advice I could offer would be to give it another proofread; there were just a few grammatical errors that can be easily fixed. I find the best way to check a story is to read it aloud, there are a few things that the mind self-corrects when reading quietly that are much easier to catch when you actually have to say them.

As far as Tanner's class goes, I can only picture him as a rogue, especially with that wry smile of his you described; while Daelan would have to be a warrior.

All in all, an extremely enjoyable read. I hope you have plans of continuing this, or if not, then to continue contributing to Warcraft fiction. I know I'll look forward to reading it.

OH man, you are simply a magnificent writer addict. Seriously. It is sooo late here and I saw your story and I thought..nah, too tired i will read it tomorrow and then I made the mistake of reading your first paragraph. as usual with your stories, I was hooked by that bloody *first paragraph* lol, and then I tried to resist reading the second but couldn't, then the third...then couldn't stop and now Im stuffed. first, nothing at all was rushed. I especially like how you blended what Daelan was thinking in between the actual discriptions of the nitty gritty. It makes it so much deeper and more satisfying than just a poke in a hole kinda thing :P After the first sex encounter I surprised the story didn't stop, but as usual I read the next paragraph and as always your writing just hauls the reader after it like a rollercoaster and I couldnot stop reading. So no, I don't think the story should have ended there as seems to be traditional with most chapters. Tradition is boring anyway and your writing is neither traditional nor boring lol. It flowed and built up momentum again and was simply, beautifully done. You are SUCH a talented writer it's unbelievable. You made me laugh out loud with the dwarf trying to pick a winner, and groan when you gave Tanner a hairy chest which I personally LOVE! I was stoked when I read that! And of course the hardcore sex worked with the romance, YOU wrote it! It was beautiful, seriously. Your descriptions are rich without being boring or cliche, your characters are REAL, and you pay just enough attention to the small things that makes them 'just so'. When I'm not too tired to read the yaoi story you linked I will compare them, but I would much rather just read your stories. They are tasteful, they are sincere without being corny, they are just...HOT... and I love your adore your writing style. You could write about anything and everyone would be hooked on the first chapter. So cough up, give us MORE :D