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Forgot to mention this but I would like to have a minute with 3 year old Lloyd there it will only take a minute.

*Smacks him in the head really hard*
Kid Lloyd: OWWWWWWWW! What was that for?!T______________T
Me: FOR FLAMING THIS COUPLE!!!!>:(
Kid Lloyd: It's gross anyway!XP
Me: If it's so gross then why do almost all of the population who love this game write and draw fanarts of them together?
Kid lloyd: How much?
Me: ALOT.
Kid Lloyd:X_________________________________________________________________________X
Me: Totally PWNED.

Well, so Mithos(Didn't want to use that hard to spell Lord whats his face)is going to use Lloyd as Martel's Vessel? This idea gives me another challenge fic idea which will unveil itself in the future eventually. And not to be a nag or anything of the sort, are you still working on the second of the Kratos/Lloyd chapter from the Kvar/Lloyd Challenge? Sorry if I ask and nag but I'm still curious. Don't worry, I'm not mad, I'll still wait. Can't wait to see what happens next chapter! Keep up the good work and a very late Merry Christmas and early Happy New Year to you! Thank You!
^______________________________________________________^ Btw, Love this chapter!

123(Wimpy100)

*smacks both Lloyd and Mithos over the head*

Mithos, you're a spoiled brat.

Lloyd, you dumbass, you told Kratos even a father loving a son that way isn't bad. You hypocrite.

Ok. I'm done now. ^___^

Yay you updated! And as I said in the last review other than anyone waiting, you don't have to apologize! I'm sure that anyone who loved reading this are probably busy seeing how it's Christmas and all! ^____^ I also read your oyako fic on fanfiction.net and I wanted to say that I really love it so far! Although what with the Kratos and Anna scene being a little bit errr....disturbing....but on the bright side, it's a really good story! And I see that you have decided to take my plot idea and used Yddrasill(ARGHHH! HIS NAME'S SO DAMN DIFFICULT! ARRRRGH!>__________<) as part of Lloyd's torture. The wedding ring shattering is also a very nice touch as well as Anna crying in the exsphere. And I take it that you are still working on the second half of tha Kratos/Lloyd chapter fronm the Kvar/Lloyd challenge right? Don't worry, this does not mean I'm mad that you haven't updated that half so I'll wait patiently once more. Anyways, I can't wait to read the next chapter where my plot idea comes to life once again!^_____________^ Keep up the good work!

123(Wimpy100)

meh. -_-

Yes, Kratos! Choose Lloyd over Cruxis! *huggles his feet with tearful eyes*

Finally they get married! Can't wait to see how Kratos's betrayal will go! I wonder what's going to happen? Hmmm? Anyways keep up the good work! ^__________________^

123(Wimpy100)

Wee! That was beautiful. Subtle yet obvious at the same time. Well done. But man, I'm not looking forward to when Kratos' real mission for Cruxis is revealed. 9-9

YAY! I SO LOVE THIS LEMON! Can't wait to read about the wedding and the flying lesson! And it seems like I have another plot idea which goes right after the flying lesson! ^________^ You could have Lord Ygdrasill(GAH! WHY DOES HIS NAME HAVE TO BE SO LONG AND HARD TO SPELL!?) or you could have Kvar come out of nowhere and have him or Ygdrasill take Lloyd as hostage and while Lloyd is taken hostage, he gets raped(By either Kvar or Ygddrasil, your pick.) You could have either of the two use an illusionary power of some sort in which Lloyd would think is Kratos trying to save him, but the Kratos he sees would not be the same Kratos but an evil Kratos made by illusion and have him rape Lloyd and after that, Either of the two half-elves I've mentioned before of your choosing will also join in and rape Lloyd. Oh! And befor I forget, while Kratos is searching for Lloyd, you could add in an evil Lloyd(the same as the evil Kratos mentioned earlier) and have him torture Kratos by either rape or something or other, your choice. Anyways, keep up the good work work and thank you!
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123(Wimpy100)

YAY! YOU USED MY IDEA! LOVED THIS CHAPPIE! CAN'T WAIT TO SEE THE LEMON! PLEASE CONTINUE! ^_____________________________________^

123(Wimpy100)

P.S.: Let me know if want any new ideas!