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for The Enduring Promise

by AutumnButterfly

schedule March 19, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Excellent job. It was sweet but also believable, especially with the way they obviously feel about each other in the games.

Great job!
schedule May 11, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I love this couple too!! I would really love to see more fics on them....and I really enjoyed reading this, great job!! ;)
schedule April 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Very nice.
schedule December 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Very nice! I've been waiting for a true Kasumi/Ryu or Ayane/Ryu lemon on this site ever since I joined up. I made a challenge for such a lemon a long time ago but put it down when no on responded. I don't know if this was in response to that, but if it was, Arigato! *bows deeply* Please continue with another chapter or a sequel!
person Simmerl
schedule October 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Kasumi isn't a samurai, but a ninja.

You should have used "nukenin".
Nuke as in nuku/to extract and ninja's nin. (Sorry, reviews aren't UTF8, I would have provided kanji)

Ayane calls her that at least once in DOA2.
person your msn buddy (you know who!)
schedule October 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hehe, great story teese.

Read it yesterday and while you were adamant about the fic being too 'cheesy' and 'lame', I thought it was well written and tasteful.

Just to also let you know, yes it did seem romantic.

Talk to you later!