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'Sokay. ::heart:: We'll wait. ^_^

for a masturbation scene that was pretty flippin awesome. now have axel meet roxas and bang him. yayness. heh, i kid, u do wat u want wit ur story so long as u update every now and then. ur fans need u dammit!

I'm sorry to hear that. Why does it seem that most of the stories I read here are afflicted with computer troubles?

Gah. That really sucks. Hard drives typically can withstand a bit of damage before going bad (I work at a data security company... we occasionally tend to throw drives at high speeds at the ground to fail them... <.<... >.>...), and laptops tend to pack them in fairly well, so... hopefully things will work out alright.

Just found this tonight. I’d give a full review, but I’m working with no sleep, so I’ll summarize.

I heart this, just a little. Is cute, silly, and everyone seems ridiculously IC, which makes me soooooooooooooooooooooooo happy. Yay no bashing, and yay Kairi and Nami being all fan-girly. XD Loved the nod to Selphie, and glad to see you working in a few random Disney people too.

As for Zexy, I swear from the way you described the hoodie, and the whole ‘ghost’ thing, I was thinking Xemnas. Seriously, I know his Nobodies are called sorcerer, but they do look like ghosts... ok, anyway, love they you’re using Zex for that.

I don’t mind the slow pace, I’ll take plot over random/mindless smutt any day.... but I won’t stop you from giving out the smutt, ‘cause the other readers would kill me. XD

Oh, and I started to crack up so bad when I saw you working the whole beach thing into the story. I vote Roxy meets Ax at the beach! Hey, Ax goes someplace he usually never visits, tries to throw off Zex--hell, maybe he goes there out of desperation to find a guy, and lo-and-behold, out redhead fins his Roxy-bear. But that’s just me and my gutter mind, so feel free to ignore it the quest for good plot.

Anyway, hope you can keep finding inspiration for this. (And here’s my contribution to the reviews = smutt fund. XD)

hahaha XD I'm lovin this so far. Axel makes me laugh, and I like the way you've written the characters. Can't wait for next update!

Pretty well written, except for a few grammatical things here and there.
I think I like where you're going with Riku and Roxas, but I guess I'll just have to wait and see.

Also, I found your characterization of Riku to be a little odd. I'm not sure why, but it just seems
off to me. But that could just be me.

But other than that, I've thoroughly enjoyed your story and happily await more chapters.

HORRAY!!! another chapter!!...i squealed when i pictured hung over Riku...i just think thats a very CUTE image ^__^....ha ha XD....i've yelled into the phone at a hung over friend almost the same thing that Axel did XD....yay!!! cant wait for the next one ^__^

omg omg omg omg more more more more!!!!!!! for serious.....i mean it...MORE!!! i'm totally loving this..like woah

I hate to not give you a giant paragraph full of review and stuffs, but... *clears throat* "zomg it's good and I want more"... *cough* I hope that makes up for it :)