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I was attempting to put a review of all these chapters together, but I think it was too long, so I guess I'll do them all individual after all. I regrettably haven’t checked up on this fic in ages! Much catching up to do so I’ll write down comments as I go along. Gah, even Gospel was taken out this time! It’s a little bit funny that something so dark has come from the Rockman universe, but I’m kind of used to this view of it now, haha. But yay, Forte is going to see Rock and the Light-folk, that always shows promise of slightly better things for Forte!

Oh, and you don’t seem to make any typos that I’m catching o_o. They must not be there or at least aren’t distracting.I can totally see Forte just vandalizing things because he’s bored. Oh Rock, still believes Forte would come just to talk, hope springs eternal eh ^^;. Eek, very dark and morbid, I feel so bad for Forte, it’s a good thing that Rock understands him at least. I wonder if this is some scheme of Wily’s to get Forte to do what he did do, it was rather injudicious to smack Forte around like that and just leave him otherwise. Silly of me to speculate though, there’s still chapters to read!

I’ve never been big on torture, especially rape fic, but I’m willing to sit through it for a purpose. And making Forte vulnerable enough to interact with Rock and the Light family is a good enough cause for me! Although there isn’t much to go off of in the games, I still feel that Forte is quite in character in how he’s behaving so far. Well, you do write my favorite Forte, but yes I agree with his characterization in this. I like Rock so far too, not overly innocent or naiive, but still an eternal spring of compassion for Forte.

I like the bits of Blues sticking around trying to make sure Rock doesn’t do anything risky with Forte, cute Bluesness yay. Rock being all worried about Forte to the point of taking him to bed with him is sweet, and any excuse of slight Rock/Forteness makes me a happy fangirl.

Couldn't finish posting reviews last night, gonna try to fit in the rest now ^^;.
8:Having Dr. Light have a conversation with Forte is a unique turn of events. Yay Forte has actual support for once!
9:Yay Rock and Forte are becoming better friends, I was hoping that might happen. The part about Rock trying to put himself in Forte’s place and empathizing with him was particularly nice. Forte being bored and apparently growing to like Rock without really realizing it is rather sweet and believable too. Rock seemed to be the one most concerned about Forte from the start, so it would have been rather sad had little come to be between them.
10: Hmm, well that answers my question about what Wily was expecting to happen with Forte. I knew he was going to try to get him back eventually, boo. Forte being willing to work all night long for the sake of doing something nice for Rock is too adorable, ah. The bit with Gospel was significant, it’s good to see how his life there has changed him into something more balanced.

Rock's definitely having an effect on Forte... why do I keep getting the feeling that Light is going to turn Gospel into X? >_<

XD Poor, poor naive Rock. Just one quick question: "the Lightbot had two older siblings." Roll's older than him? That's different. Glad to see Forte enjoying himself, even if the atmosphere is tense.

Finally, something positive happens! Dr. Light and Forte's "talk" was rather interesting to read.

I love it. Oh so much pain and so much possiblity of comfort.
Okay I read and reviewed. Now where is the next chapter!! Gimme! Me want. Please, pretty please witha cherry on top. Please.

0.o Wow... that description was pretty graphic. I hadn't realized that Forte was that bad off...