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September 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This is a really good story so far. I hope you continue with it. This is actually one of the better fanfics posted on here, there aren't many good ones anymore. So I really hope you continue with this.
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August 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I've been reading this since around the second chapter because my friend linked me to it, but I just HAD to create an account to review this chapter, I loved it SO MUCH.
The 'supervising his ass' bit was hilarious XD
I just got back from a con that had three (three!) Hard Gay cosplayers at it, so that was ALL I could think when I read the costume description, even now I know what it was I don't think I'll quite be able to see it as anything other than Hard Gay XD
And that ending was just... PERFECT. I can't wait for more XD
The 'supervising his ass' bit was hilarious XD
I just got back from a con that had three (three!) Hard Gay cosplayers at it, so that was ALL I could think when I read the costume description, even now I know what it was I don't think I'll quite be able to see it as anything other than Hard Gay XD
And that ending was just... PERFECT. I can't wait for more XD
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July 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
AHAH the wait was worth it. Please udapte soon. I love Axel's obsession with Roxas's ass and Roxas's sexy cop costume! Hurry and write the next chapter!
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July 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i like this story alot its rather inventive and i can't wait for the update
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June 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
FINALLY! And update!^3^ I was afraid this was a dead one :D
Aa~ This story still continues to rock ;3 Prolly my favourite on this site at the moment. I just love how their relationships is going. And teh smex! And lotsa other stuff, but my english doesn't stretch that far. xD
Err... Keep up the great job!
Aa~ This story still continues to rock ;3 Prolly my favourite on this site at the moment. I just love how their relationships is going. And teh smex! And lotsa other stuff, but my english doesn't stretch that far. xD
Err... Keep up the great job!
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June 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ohhhhhh, I love love love this fic! I can't wait to read more!
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June 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow! I was shocked to see this updated agian! I am glad I re-read it again! I just love this story! :D I was wondering how Axel knew about the number thing..does tha mean that he remembers something from when they were at the Org? :D And I love how at the end of chapter 4 he is going to talk to Riku XD I love how he hates Riku. XD I cant wait for more. :D
~Ley
~Ley
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June 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow! Me likes this story...I never would have put Axel as a tattoo artist, but it matches him so well! Please keep this story going; I like it a lot!
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May 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
wow, that last message made me think that axel was somehow watching him. Which is creepy and hot at the same time. Hope to read more soon!
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April 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Please update again soon! This story is so hot and i loved the phone thing. Please update again soon.