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This just keeps getting better and better. I love it and you are a brilliant writer. I can't wait to read the next chapter. Keep me posted.

Ok so that's one couple down and one in the works. What the hell happened to the fireworks though? Did Axel make a mistake? Did someone tamper with them?

Totally fell in love with this fic! Please Please Please gimmme more!

This story is hilarious. Keep me updated I want to read more. I love it so far so keep writing and keep my updated.

Okay I'm really liking this one. And I found it by chance, which is good since it's really filled out ^_^ This is nice chapters of greatness. I like that Sora can hold his own but is still protected by his brothers, though it's sad the poor boy is being used by Axel. Maybe he'll comfont him? And Roxas is being angsty again which is okay since you do it in not an extreme matter, so he's great too. I hope you update soon. That'll be evil of you to draw me in with 9 chapters then stop completly, unless you have a block or something.

I like this a lot, and am hopeful for fast update.

He he. Axel is fun in this story. Of course, Roxas and Sora are too. And Riku. And Cloud. And Leon . . . I guess what I'm getting at is that you have a wonderful story going here with characters that are staying in character. That is a hard find especially with the cast size you are playing with. Long story short, I'm looking forward to when you update. I really want to see what happens next!