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February 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
One of my all time favorite Kingdom Heart's stories! I love the interactions and character portrayals. I haven't visited the site in a while, and stumbled upon this story while browsing; one of the best stumbles I've had :)
I was wondering if you by chance had an account on Fanfiction.net? I know this story's heavier sex scenes would have to be edited out, but I would really love to be able to see this story there. There just do not seem to be that many decent Kingdom Hearts stories out there, and this one is by far one of the best. It's just a thought though. I look forward to new chapters, keep up the excellent work!
I was wondering if you by chance had an account on Fanfiction.net? I know this story's heavier sex scenes would have to be edited out, but I would really love to be able to see this story there. There just do not seem to be that many decent Kingdom Hearts stories out there, and this one is by far one of the best. It's just a thought though. I look forward to new chapters, keep up the excellent work!
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January 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
omg... these chapters were sooooooooo INTENSE.
it was awesome, as always.
and it's like, FINALLY!
*mumbles: stupid riku and sora being to cautious for their own damn good...*
also... that chapter with axel and roxas...
daaaaamn. that was fuckin' HOT!
it gave me shivers.
i LOVE this story! ur so good at writing. i envy you. --_--
but i wuv u too for making it! ^_^
so please continue soon.
looking forward to it!
it was awesome, as always.
and it's like, FINALLY!
*mumbles: stupid riku and sora being to cautious for their own damn good...*
also... that chapter with axel and roxas...
daaaaamn. that was fuckin' HOT!
it gave me shivers.
i LOVE this story! ur so good at writing. i envy you. --_--
but i wuv u too for making it! ^_^
so please continue soon.
looking forward to it!
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December 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I haven't been able to bring myself to stop since I started reading this, but since I've reached the fated chapter where Axel and Roxas consumate their love, I need to. By the way, that "love me enough to leave" line is the kind of thing every girl wants to hear on her first time.
Fantastic story, downright addicting. It takes a special kind of skill to toss out one more Kingdom Hearts school AU and make it work. I'm pushing on, and rest assured I'll be reviewing again at the next block.
Fantastic story, downright addicting. It takes a special kind of skill to toss out one more Kingdom Hearts school AU and make it work. I'm pushing on, and rest assured I'll be reviewing again at the next block.
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December 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Nothing says "merry Christmas" like a happy ending to a dangerous roller coaster ride of a chapter and a lot of boys deeply in love.
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December 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Dear god in heaven, what took me so long to get around to reading this? ::Remembers she’s in college.:: . . . . Never mind.
I spent most of yesterday and gods knows how much of today reading this thick, gorgeous fiction. My god, I love how well you’ve written this, how thoroughly thought out this is, how well you’ve woven not only all the KH cast into this, but other FF and Square people into this. The attention to detail, the precision in characterization, the fact that you didn’t turn Kairi into a bitch--and that you aren’t bashing ANYONE!!!!!!! Woman/Man/Haku[1] I love you for that alone!
Another point I love, you aren’t making it easy on anyone. The pairs aren’t just falling into each others' arms, one or the other or Axel has to work at it to get them together. I love the fluid plot, the building intrigue, and the very CLAMP school setting. And then there’s the magic and the keyblades and weapons and . . . . I just love this!
I had to stop in the middle of Sora getting hauled out of the hotel in chapter 13 to just sit down and write this, to make sure I wasn’t too tired before I could leave a review. I know after I post this I’m going to have to read some more, and then be so out of it that my next review will be a few days later--blame my finals & friends & girlfriend. X3
But . . . gods . . . I should have started in on this long ago, it has my favorites! Well, most of them, I like SoRiKai and AkuRokuNami, but SoRi and AkuRoku with the girls still being on good terms is just as sweet.
Oh! and I love how you’re giving some of the lesser played Organization members some love--whoot for Vexen being all young, smexy [2] and library-ish! And I totally appreciate all the interconnections and webbed relationships that everyone has connecting them together. Like Hayner is the brother of Lexaeus, but he also dated Seifer who dated Squalleon--I think it was Dracoqueen22’s Yuffie who came up with that nickname for Leon--after he [Seifer] dated Roxas, and so forth. It’s just so intriguing to follow where all the lines converge.
Man . . . . I can safely say that I’m addicted to this. And it’s interesting to see how you handled this, concentrating on the social interactions and leaving the lessons out of it. It’s just . . . . . I just can’t stop grinning as I read this. The clear elegant prose, the exceedingly rare spelling/grammar errors--so rare that I don’t even remember them after seeing them--the beautiful balance between dialogue and narrative, the description and depiction of what’s going on.......
This fic f****ng breathes. And with every successive chapter, I can feel myself willingly drowning in this fully realized world.
Thank you for writing this. May you always have the inspiration to life up your pen.
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[1] Haku = an androgeness male character from the Naruto anime/manga who introduced himself convincingly as a girl in order to infiltrate the ranks of the protagonists. My friends and I use ‘Haku’ as a gender neutral pronoun.
[2] When playing CoM I originally thought his name was Vixen and that 'he' was a 'she'. And if he could pull off being a she in old age, he had to have been a sexy bastich when he was younger.
I spent most of yesterday and gods knows how much of today reading this thick, gorgeous fiction. My god, I love how well you’ve written this, how thoroughly thought out this is, how well you’ve woven not only all the KH cast into this, but other FF and Square people into this. The attention to detail, the precision in characterization, the fact that you didn’t turn Kairi into a bitch--and that you aren’t bashing ANYONE!!!!!!! Woman/Man/Haku[1] I love you for that alone!
Another point I love, you aren’t making it easy on anyone. The pairs aren’t just falling into each others' arms, one or the other or Axel has to work at it to get them together. I love the fluid plot, the building intrigue, and the very CLAMP school setting. And then there’s the magic and the keyblades and weapons and . . . . I just love this!
I had to stop in the middle of Sora getting hauled out of the hotel in chapter 13 to just sit down and write this, to make sure I wasn’t too tired before I could leave a review. I know after I post this I’m going to have to read some more, and then be so out of it that my next review will be a few days later--blame my finals & friends & girlfriend. X3
But . . . gods . . . I should have started in on this long ago, it has my favorites! Well, most of them, I like SoRiKai and AkuRokuNami, but SoRi and AkuRoku with the girls still being on good terms is just as sweet.
Oh! and I love how you’re giving some of the lesser played Organization members some love--whoot for Vexen being all young, smexy [2] and library-ish! And I totally appreciate all the interconnections and webbed relationships that everyone has connecting them together. Like Hayner is the brother of Lexaeus, but he also dated Seifer who dated Squalleon--I think it was Dracoqueen22’s Yuffie who came up with that nickname for Leon--after he [Seifer] dated Roxas, and so forth. It’s just so intriguing to follow where all the lines converge.
Man . . . . I can safely say that I’m addicted to this. And it’s interesting to see how you handled this, concentrating on the social interactions and leaving the lessons out of it. It’s just . . . . . I just can’t stop grinning as I read this. The clear elegant prose, the exceedingly rare spelling/grammar errors--so rare that I don’t even remember them after seeing them--the beautiful balance between dialogue and narrative, the description and depiction of what’s going on.......
This fic f****ng breathes. And with every successive chapter, I can feel myself willingly drowning in this fully realized world.
Thank you for writing this. May you always have the inspiration to life up your pen.
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[1] Haku = an androgeness male character from the Naruto anime/manga who introduced himself convincingly as a girl in order to infiltrate the ranks of the protagonists. My friends and I use ‘Haku’ as a gender neutral pronoun.
[2] When playing CoM I originally thought his name was Vixen and that 'he' was a 'she'. And if he could pull off being a she in old age, he had to have been a sexy bastich when he was younger.
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December 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
*dies from cuteness overload*...oh.my.god.......cutest christmas scene ever.....wow.....and oh nuuuu!!! poor Riku T_T.....well...at least he as a loving, adorable Sora to snuggle him and make it all better...but owch.....that had to hurt T_T...and any Orgy 13 action makes me happy ^__^...warms me up on this cold as hell day.((i can never remember the roman numerals >_<))
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December 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That was wonderful. Thank you for updating and so much too. It was perfect for the holidays. But does this mean it's finished? I hope not ^_^
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December 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Yay! That made me very happy. I can't wait for more!
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November 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Aww no fair leaving off with a cliffie like that. And I see you're up to chapter 17 over on FF. Please update as soon as you can cuz I want to read the whole unrated version not the teen version >_<
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November 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OMG OMG OMG MORE???!!!! PLEASE!!!???.....why the hell is Sora reminding me of me in this T_T....but i guess thats not so bad...but the clueless thing is never fun >_<.....omg omg omg......when are Axel and Roxas gonna get together *waits impatiently* love this *throws Sora and Riku plushies and fresh warm muffins at you* please continue!!! :3