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October 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 14
After last chapter I was resigned to a sad depressing story. I am glad to see that it was a dream!
I'm not saying that I am expecting an upbeat fairy tale but I am glad to see that Carlos did not in fact rip her throat out. It really showed how much the dream took out of her though, that she told Carlos that it was perfect in his arms.
Great job. I can't wait to see what else you have in store for your faithful readers! ;-)
After last chapter I was resigned to a sad depressing story. I am glad to see that it was a dream!
I'm not saying that I am expecting an upbeat fairy tale but I am glad to see that Carlos did not in fact rip her throat out. It really showed how much the dream took out of her though, that she told Carlos that it was perfect in his arms.
Great job. I can't wait to see what else you have in store for your faithful readers! ;-)
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October 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 10
Man! I feel so bad for Carlos. That sucks! Damn it I guess I am just a sucker for happy endings. Oh well I guess I will just have to deal with the shattered dreams of a happy ending. :-) Oh well.
I really don't like Haun. I have a bad feeling about him.
Another well written chapter. I am so glad that you have been updating so frequently. I hate when reading a story and you get really into it and the author stops updating. Anyway... enough of my rambling. Great story you have got me hooked! Hope to see another update soon.
Man! I feel so bad for Carlos. That sucks! Damn it I guess I am just a sucker for happy endings. Oh well I guess I will just have to deal with the shattered dreams of a happy ending. :-) Oh well.
I really don't like Haun. I have a bad feeling about him.
Another well written chapter. I am so glad that you have been updating so frequently. I hate when reading a story and you get really into it and the author stops updating. Anyway... enough of my rambling. Great story you have got me hooked! Hope to see another update soon.
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October 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
NOOOOOO!!!!
How coould you stop there?!?!?!
This is amazing. So much detail and so many insights into their feelings. I am loving this story and hope you continue. Soon!!! :-)
How coould you stop there?!?!?!
This is amazing. So much detail and so many insights into their feelings. I am loving this story and hope you continue. Soon!!! :-)
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October 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Yeah I am so happy that you updated!!! This story is so amazing! I have been looking for an Alice/Carlos story since I saw the movie. I was so excited to find this one that I am anxious for the next chapter. :-)
I kind of resent their new addition. He just had to break in during an emotional moment. Alice and Carlos don't get to many of those.
I know that they can't just leave him to die but a small part of me hopes he bites the bullet (so to speak) in the next chapter. I guess that is the selfish part of me wanting to see Alice and Carlos finally take that next step in their relationship.
Anyway... I love this story sooooo much and can't wait for the next chapter!!!!! Hope to see an update soon.
I kind of resent their new addition. He just had to break in during an emotional moment. Alice and Carlos don't get to many of those.
I know that they can't just leave him to die but a small part of me hopes he bites the bullet (so to speak) in the next chapter. I guess that is the selfish part of me wanting to see Alice and Carlos finally take that next step in their relationship.
Anyway... I love this story sooooo much and can't wait for the next chapter!!!!! Hope to see an update soon.
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October 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
HOORAY!!! - I am so glad someone is writing a FaFic about this movie, I love how you....well, if I say anything it will be a spoiler, but HE is my favorite character and I'm glad someone is writing about him. Please please PLEASE update soon!!