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schedule November 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful! ^_^ I'm so glad I finally found a Nel/Clair fic, and such an enjoyable one, too- it's unbelievably hard to find a yuri fic that's both sweet and sexy, but you managed it! I tip my hat to you. :3 Keep up the good work~
schedule November 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Nice. There are a few spelling errors here and there and at least once where you missed a letter altogether, but otherwise this was a very well written story. I mean that, too many people post things blatantly grammarically wrong and it picks me off. Very nice job and with a quick read over all your problems will be easily seen I bet. For cliche's sake: keep up the good work!