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for Dark cloud ( 2 ) : Time is changing

by Darkone21

schedule April 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love Dark Cloud and its totally awesome sequel.

But I tell you, this story is an eyesore. Poor grammar and punctuation throughout. And why is everything bold? If you'd clean up this fic and make it a whole lot more readable, I'd love to give it a read. Until then, I'll have to pass.
schedule November 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Yeah, that beautiful baby.