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November 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
(blinkblink) actually i hoped that shadow wouldn't be hurted...and that part of knuckles liking being raped by shadow is good...i love shadow!!!! how dare you!!!!! i'm gonna find stories about shadow/knuckles now. because of you!!!!!! (cries) shadow has a broken leg!!!!!!
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November 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really want you to continue this! I think it would be a good idea to keep going and expand on how Sonic has to deal with what happened to him.
It's got a good concept so why not continue? :]
It's got a good concept so why not continue? :]
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October 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Awesome awesome awesome. Can't ever get enough!
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September 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Why is sonic such wickling here? It's ridiculous.
And it's near impossible to force oral sex on someone when they are free to kick and fight. You're the one who will end up with no teeth or eyes.
And it's near impossible to force oral sex on someone when they are free to kick and fight. You're the one who will end up with no teeth or eyes.
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September 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I found this to be really well written, and I liked how you have explored what it must be like for a guy to get raped. I've never been able to imagine it before, not that I have tried I suppose. but when you said you were trying to get into the head of a guy who had just been raped, I tried to imagine how it would be different from what a girl would experience and react, and I just couldn't. So for me, this story was really interesting as well as disturbing. I'd like to see how Sonic deals with it, poor little thing. Please continue?
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September 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Don't understand what the fuss is being raised about.
This is a deliciously, disturbing story. I'm not sure what to really say. I don't believe it's bad, I personally just want to see where exactly it's going. I feel incrediably sorry for Sonic and even for Knuckles for being so...well...Knuckles. Though Sonic's additude towards homosexuals could stand to be improved. Will Tails or the other fits somehow into the story? (Not in a sexual manner really.)
I look forward to your new update as I want to see what happens next.
This is a deliciously, disturbing story. I'm not sure what to really say. I don't believe it's bad, I personally just want to see where exactly it's going. I feel incrediably sorry for Sonic and even for Knuckles for being so...well...Knuckles. Though Sonic's additude towards homosexuals could stand to be improved. Will Tails or the other fits somehow into the story? (Not in a sexual manner really.)
I look forward to your new update as I want to see what happens next.
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September 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
First off, it occurs that a mix of the two themes might be best, from my view. Him dealing with being raped, and perhaps the occaasional bit more of smut. Really, though, I'm not too bothered on the smut.
I have to say, I like this. Knuckles comes off as a decent, believable guy who really didn't realize quite how badly he screwed up. And still doesn't. He has that semi-childish quality of believing saying sorry is enough.
Shadow though... Something I WOULD like to see, is a chapter done from his point of view, to explore what kind of mindset actually acts like that. If he actually believes the crap he says, or if it's an act, and the motivations behind it.
Who knows. You might even be able to pull a happy ending.
... I just jynxed that possibility to bits, didn't I?
Although I suppose ARAAT kinda had a happy ending. More of a pyrhhic victory than anything though.
I have to say, I like this. Knuckles comes off as a decent, believable guy who really didn't realize quite how badly he screwed up. And still doesn't. He has that semi-childish quality of believing saying sorry is enough.
Shadow though... Something I WOULD like to see, is a chapter done from his point of view, to explore what kind of mindset actually acts like that. If he actually believes the crap he says, or if it's an act, and the motivations behind it.
Who knows. You might even be able to pull a happy ending.
... I just jynxed that possibility to bits, didn't I?
Although I suppose ARAAT kinda had a happy ending. More of a pyrhhic victory than anything though.
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September 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I think the next chapter should be about how Sonic deals with the pain of getting raped twice. The first two chapter was mostly about him getting raped nonstop and I think you should lay off the rape in the next chapter and just focus on how Sonic deal with it.
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September 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
CONTINUE IT. Please? In any way possible.
Come on, I signed up here just to review this story (for the most part)! XD
Come on, I signed up here just to review this story (for the most part)! XD
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September 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
It's Harley. Ugly is the norm.
And what is it with you and having Shadow as totally deranged? Jeeze, all the guys got is a lack of social skills and a big case of angst...
In any case, nice work I guess, although it did seem a little out of the blue. I mean... Exactly why does Shadows understanding of the concept of "friends" go immediately to sex, willing or not?
And what is it with you and having Shadow as totally deranged? Jeeze, all the guys got is a lack of social skills and a big case of angst...
In any case, nice work I guess, although it did seem a little out of the blue. I mean... Exactly why does Shadows understanding of the concept of "friends" go immediately to sex, willing or not?