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September 8, 2020 at 12:00 AM
Definitely want to read how he deals with this. Also, nice story. It's written really well.
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May 27, 2017 at 12:00 AM
This was different, and I liked it. I vote for drugs. Make sonic really fucked up.
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October 11, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I'd be willing to read a continuation of this fic. Sonic is so closeted that I'm going to enjoy watching all the coping mechanisms he uses to deal with his plethora of issue.
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June 26, 2010 at 12:00 AM
This might not be some people's cup'o'tea, but it sure is mine. This is JUST what I started prowling the Sonic category for. Thanks for writing something deliciously hardcore and unpretentious.
As much as I enjoy noncon & victimization, I LOVED it when Knuckles finally got some sense and ripped into Shadow. Go Knuckles yey ^w^
I'm a dork, I want Sonic and Knuckles to make up. ... aaaaand then there would be more sex. *cough* Yeah, one-track mind over here. Perhaps that would trivialize what went before, but if done right perhaps not.
Anyway follow your OWN muse should you decide to write more, because clearly, it is brilliant.
As much as I enjoy noncon & victimization, I LOVED it when Knuckles finally got some sense and ripped into Shadow. Go Knuckles yey ^w^
I'm a dork, I want Sonic and Knuckles to make up. ... aaaaand then there would be more sex. *cough* Yeah, one-track mind over here. Perhaps that would trivialize what went before, but if done right perhaps not.
Anyway follow your OWN muse should you decide to write more, because clearly, it is brilliant.
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June 21, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Heh, great writing there, Harl. All it takes for a woman to visualize what it'd feel like to be another woman whose being raped requires only a selective imagination. For a woman to visualize what it'd be like for a man to be raped, and pull it off with such success as you did, takes talent!
I'm not into rape and I'm not into Yaoi, but I read this story to learn to read you a bit more. I may be doing that more often in order to benefit our story. Great job, Harl! Froggy did good too! My only complaint is that despite all the struggling, it all seemed too easy for our favorite ebony hedgehog. The rape of one man from another usually consists of full-out fighting. Shadow may be strong, but not strong enough to rape Sonic without having to strike him more than twice. Those two should have been going blow-for-blow, with Shadow's doing more damage and possibly injuring his victim into helplessness.
Two guys was hard enough for me to read, so I'm stopping at chapter one. Three guys? No thank you.
Once again, great work!
~S.F.
I'm not into rape and I'm not into Yaoi, but I read this story to learn to read you a bit more. I may be doing that more often in order to benefit our story. Great job, Harl! Froggy did good too! My only complaint is that despite all the struggling, it all seemed too easy for our favorite ebony hedgehog. The rape of one man from another usually consists of full-out fighting. Shadow may be strong, but not strong enough to rape Sonic without having to strike him more than twice. Those two should have been going blow-for-blow, with Shadow's doing more damage and possibly injuring his victim into helplessness.
Two guys was hard enough for me to read, so I'm stopping at chapter one. Three guys? No thank you.
Once again, great work!
~S.F.
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June 10, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I would love for you to continue this. SonKnux would be good too. -thrust-
I also found it funny how it says "review for no apparent reason" >_>;
I also found it funny how it says "review for no apparent reason" >_>;
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April 13, 2010 at 12:00 AM
so disturbing and so delious at the same time
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March 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I think you should continue it. It was decently in-character. I likes.
Maybe Sonic could eventually break down in front of someone.. Not necesarily a crying mess, but that's one way to go about it. I think he deserves to be heard out at this point, though.
Mmm. Shadow rape.
Maybe Sonic could eventually break down in front of someone.. Not necesarily a crying mess, but that's one way to go about it. I think he deserves to be heard out at this point, though.
Mmm. Shadow rape.
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February 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
very dark and angst story, awesomeness applies here, i do feel the sadness for sonic, and very well done too, your story sounding very realistic, lol no complaints from me, except for full support, so please continue soon! i just hope it is a sonic/ shadow stuff, and hope they work out soon (U_U) very sad sonic has to suffer. so please keep up the good work!
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February 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
this is some what interresting. pleas continue.