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for Irrevocable

by Croik

person Bonnie
schedule October 7, 2016 at 12:00 AM

I loved the doubt and the fear and how you described their way around each other.

I had some perplexity around the fact the Phoenix was not called Ryuichi, but the story is so well written and fascinating it slipped out of my mind after a few paragraphs.

So, well done! Thanks for writing this beautiful, dark piece

schedule July 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh my god, that was the best Kristoph I've ever seen. You make him so scary!! Which is just the way he should be but I'm just without words at how well this is written....Please! Do more fics with him!! He's so evil and strangely lovable....
person Nexides
schedule March 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Yessss....That was VERY nice. I loved it.