schedule
January 2, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Nicely done. There's a little inconsistency in that Elicoor II didn't have horses, but lums. Other than that, I didn't see any glaring errors in spelling or grammar. What little dialog you had was clean and even that lack was perfectly suited for your piece. Not a bad job at all at conveying Fayt's emotions.
I like muchly.
I like muchly.
schedule
August 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow. I loved that. And I'm so glad it turned out all right in the end.
schedule
March 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
*stammers* This was sooooo beautiful!!! <3
schedule
February 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
That was so pretty... I cried a little too. Beautiful word useage.
schedule
January 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ahhhhh sooo gooodd!! I love your usage of repetition! Write more AlbelxFayt storiesss! lol <3