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Aww poor Seth! At least Dante is going to save him...right?


I wish I had a banana guitar.

ABOUT DAMN TIME!!! I've been waiting for this chapter like a Buddhist monk waiting for enlightenment.

I think this story is great. why haven't you updated it. I mean really, I love it. I really wish you would finish it.

Er. o_o
*hides in shame* I've never been so late. x_x

Regular demon huh? ;D Absolutely no pointing in your direction, just random note: why Dante has to get stabbed, cut, ran through etc. in most of his encounters with demons? If he hadn't got his extra healing, he'd be one crappy hunter. ;P I can buy it as showing off when he was younger, but there's no excuse for a sane adult.
I also like to think it hurts him when he receives damage, and despise authors who make Lady shoot him just for fun. >.> (Or anyone shooting him just because 'he's gonna heal anyway' >.<).

I've seen Jurassic Park but I don't remember the sounds... I based my opinion on the noise my two German shepherds make. It can be described more as mixture of scraping and clicking. O_o They've never had their claws cut.

I liked chapter 12. It looks like a bridge chapter, something between introduction and main plot, so I don't have really any comments ^^; But it definitely sounds interesting.

Also, DMC4 should be out somewhen this week. You're probably going to get it faster than me, so please tell me whether Capcom managed to screw up Dante's character as much as the trailers and random cutscenes suggest it. >.>
I miss you ._.

Radius: "Ah, Seth. I don't know what to say about him without giving the game away. But let's just say he's going to be rather interesting later on, toward the midpoint of the story. There's a major theme in here underlining this story that I haven't mentioned. It's the backbone of the story, in fact. Still, I'm leaving it to you and the rest to read between the lines and figure it out."

I'm confused, who is Seth? and what does SMTN mean? Sorry, I don't know who Seth is and that he was in the game, is he from the DMC4? If not and he's in the earlier games, then boy, it's been awhile and I forgot the characters and plot. LOL >.< Which makes me hate myself, cause now I find myself not a true DMC fan. -__-; And uhm, I'm not sure who the couples will be in the story, I'm guessing Seth, probably wrong, but could you tell me who is coupling with who now; I know it says that there will be M/M and M/F but wasn't specific.... such a teaser! X3 Sorry, just a confused reader, not sure what's going on, but I shall read on to the other chapters. >.< Just not sure if this story is suppose to be basing off the game or not >.> From what people's comments are I don't know now. XD;

Wow Seth knew a little too much about werewolves. I wonder what's wrong with him. I hope he isn't taking that goth kid into the fun house to kill him or whatever. And those Dobermans...Seth had a little too much control over them. I think he might be a descendant of Helene. He even mentions how his father went on and on about it being an honour and what not. I can't wait for the hot man loving that's coming up! w00t!! I never say that, lol! What have you done to me! Also I'm glad you like my fic Love Planet. The next chapter is coming up in a bit so stay tuned! ^_^

Wow, that was one hell of a chapter o.o

Dante felt attracted to only one of his partners. XD Always a jerk, huh? XD
Ha, I hope he won't do anything stupid. Fortunately, he seems to be too deep into relationship...

Not really surprised Seth vanished. It's full moon after all. ^^ And you just confirmed he's got one of his furry days. ^^ However, it would be a great shock if he didn't return... Seth seems too kind to be a serial killer, but one never knows.
I don't expect Dante to get a brainwave soon, he has too little data. No creepy factories, no videogames, just the moon and the funny fact that most of the evil stuff happens in Seth's district. ^^ It will be so much fun to watch him struggle to process all these.
By the way, what about his vacations? He doesn't stick to his word does he XD And how can he care about dry-cleaning when he already has a huge hole in the fabric right over his belly? XD

The fight scene could be more dynamic. I think the descriptions were too complex and too detailed. Also, the last part of the chapter was too long to have great impact. After three paraghraphs reader already knows something wrong is going to happen, so the following massacre is not a shock. I wonder though what attacked these guys... Claws on pavement don't exactly make clicking noise. Huh. O.o The plot's getting thicker ^^

Damsel is the only female character so far. Females are very important as they are more observant when it comes to psychological affairs ^^ Dante may muse about Seth's anxieties, but he's more likely to get irritated than to try to help the poor guy. Or rather he could not identify the problem at all, given his limited interactions with humans. Anyway, Damsel sounds very mature here. Not quite the crazy attention seeker ;)
Her mother is scary though. I can't help but wonder whether her madness may be tied with the main plot or is just a nice addition...

Some action is always nice. Developing characters can be interesting as hell, but after 100 pages - yawn XD

Haha, I think I've got it all figured out, but I don't want to say anything and discourage you from whatever plot you've chose. I do have two requests though.

First request: At the end of the story, Seth cannot be dead. I don't care if Dante has to go to Hell and drag the guy back, but I think I like him too much to appreciate a death ending. I mean, I know there are times when death/lovers breaking up/other sad endings are the only real way to end a story, and it can be good still. In this case though, I think I'd just frown at my monitor and ignore that ending in favor of whatever I made up in my mind, because I think I've grown too attached to Seth/Dante (heh, this also has made it *really* tough to read any other DMC fics because I keep looking around, hoping to find Seth somewhere).

Second request (not as important as the first but something I'd still like to see): Dante fuck Seth in Devil Mode >:P

Oh, and I forgot to ask, are there more "others" out there? You know, ones like Lady and Trish, or are there "powerful" humans out there (ones like Lady's mother Magda, or w/e the hell her name was)? What kind of role do they play? Seth doesn't seemed that perturbed by the fact that Dante's an other, do they often meet others on the streets in this city? Heh, it's something that I've been wondering about for a while now.

Let's get this straight. I don't like yaoi. I especially do not like yaoi involving Dante and Devil May Cry.

I fucking love this story. I love Seth, I love the Paranormal 5, and I love Dante being so open the way he is. He's bi. So what? It made me not care that he was having hot man sex with Seth. Seth is so awesome. I want to hug him and sing Duran Duran songs with him all night. I just hope he doesn't have anything with the demons that are attacking the city. It seems as if when he showed up...that's when the attacks started.

This story is a yaoi...but it's not. I can't get over how hot this fic is.It is so compelling and it definetly grabs onto you and forces you to want to see what happens next. If I could favorite you...I would. But since I can't all I can do is seriously recommend your fic to anyone with an open mind. You definetly changed my mind on yaoi.

I can't wait for the next chapter! Yay!