rate_review Reviews

Dude, that was an amazing story! It could use some editing, and more background on several of the characters. I had a bit of a hard time telling the ones from the games apart from the ones you created, I know that Jack, Miya and Benjamin Rosenberg were original, but I'm not sure about the others. Either way, good story, I like how you made him vulnerable, and not some mary sue self insert, like so many fan fictions have. Maybe in the next one, have him do some more traditional GTA style missions? It would be a cool video game. Hope you write more soon, since it says you havent updated in a couple years.

Wow I loved it!
^Dei