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for Twice Shy

by StarShineMB

person manawolf
schedule June 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OM NOM NOM NOM NOM NOM

Er... that is... I *heart* Erol.

Details are so very delicious. Love the back story and bits of history and Erol fingering Jak's mouth. Nicely IC. Thanks for writing it!!
person Inigeshi
schedule January 31, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh. My. God. I want to have your baby! (not really but that's how fuckin' unbelievably good that fic was) that was increadable oh and especially that last bit mmm go jak
schedule December 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow, this is my first NC Jak fic, and I love NC. Well written, loved the descriptions and dialogue :D!
person Soran Marlovic
schedule August 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This a very beautiful fic. Its sad that such a small fandom so rarely keeps to the character's personalities, but you really hit gold with this. The scene is so plausible, and so pleasurable.