rate_review Reviews

Incredibly sexy. I enjoyed this from beginning to end. I love how The genera started out confident and strong and then became confused and weak. I enjoyed the almost childish carelessless of Khan, his impulsiveness and the way he would change his mind on a whim. All very sexy. i would very much enjoy reading me of Khan tormenting his general.

I thought this story was done rather well. However, it felt like you rushed it at the end, like you just wanted to get it over with. I know that's something that tends to happen a lot in stories (myself as an author included). Remember to take your time. It's like the time I was trying to make a chicken dish. I was so paranoid about overdoing it, that I undercooked it. Don't under cook your stories. But other than that, good job!