rate_review Reviews

I may be late to the party, but I did suspect Amy, especially after the chapter with her and Sonic exploring, but the second I couldn't figure out. I suspected him a little but not much more than anyone else. Although the little hint in the author's note near the end did make me a bit more suspicious, I was still pretty doubtful. I was like "ah, it couldn't have been him... no way.."
That said I thought it was damn good, and wouldn't mind seeing another if you ever have the gumption.

i thought it was good ^_^

I want another!

Pretty awesome. I'm glad I was wrong, I got a surprise ending! Though, Tails is fuzzy and cute and he was more of an anti-hero vigilante in this story, stopping Gerald from selling highly advanced technology to the government. Even if he did have totally different reasons of wanting to kill Gerald, he did do some good in his actions (which is pretty much the definition of anti-hero). So, I'm on his side, actually and I feel bad for him, since he'll probably go to prison for being a good guy (at least in my eyes).

Amy's a bitch! Hope she dies and I hope Shadow turns alright.

It's a good story and I hope you make a sequel! However, this might sound offensive right here, but I have to say it. I've been neglecting to review as often as I normally would, simply because you ask me to review in your author's notes in your stories so much. You know you're good authors, you don't need us to say it every five seconds. It feels like you're trying to make me feed your ego and I'm not up for that.

Terrible terrible. The obvious guy is never supposed to be the actual killer, thats what people expect! Oh well Tails' case could probably hold up in court or at least provide a week of T.V. drama but Amy is just screwed. I wouldn't mind one more chapter giving the details on what becomes of them all.

*claps and aplause from thousands od non-exsistant people.*
And that is how I feel about this.
Now, I Personally suck at trying to figure things out, mostly because Im lazy.
ho hah.
I mght make something like this.. but Mine woud suck infinatly more.
Not a good reveiw, I know but whatever.

Hm. What about Rouge's (presumably loaded) gun, and Shadow's mention of Gerald's death in his creepy letters? Red herrings? Plus, Amy doesn't strike me as the impulsive/opportunistic murderer type - 'Amy just didn't like her' doesn't really cut it when you consider the others' more concrete motives.

Nice work. OOC all round, but it's obvious you've put quite a bit of thought into this. Plus, instead of violent horrible rape there's a daft yet brief Sonamy streak - gold star :)

This is getting juicy!

The most obvious one is definetly Tails whom not only has a possible strong motive, strong evidence against him, but also the most important to me the opportunity to kill them both and not just one or the other that conflicts everyone else. Even if he isn't the killer (cmon it's never the obvious guy!)with this evidence and no proof to substantiate his alibi he would be the easiest one to pin it on. However all the clues given can easily be shifted
around to make any of them the murderer so I can't really guess who did it but Tails is the most obvious choice or one of them is trying really hard to make it look that way.

PENIS FLOPPY