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for The Call of the Dark

by Brandon

person Michael Johnson
schedule May 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 2, I laughed at the part when She said, "I didn't so they wouldn't fuck me!" "When did we make that arrangement."
Humouris, The Mummy Returns was a good movie.
schedule May 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
noooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo!!! it cant finish there i must have morreeee!!! ARRRGGGGHHHHHHH!!! lol sorry uhhh please write more soon? it was really really good ^^
person crokonyte
schedule March 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i love it, the Drama, the action, the whole she-bang.

btw can you have Yvette have her way Namine and made it appear to the others that she killed her, but kept her as her own pet.
person Sammie
schedule January 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I wait impatiently for the next chapter to be added I hope its up soon! Please send me an email!!!
person Sammie
schedule January 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I loved it. I hope you can put up a new chapter please if you can email me when you update
schedule October 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
im just wanna say that you story is awesome, i really enjoy the style that you have, how describe the story, the fear of kairi, and the spiral of degeneration and lust in that she fall.

i want read more of this, waiting for she: fingering, playing whit toys, and more, and more, i really want kairi, but you know, only are a few fic, that she have action.

PS: excuse me if my word aren´t the apropiates, or i haven´t a good use of the words, but, i don´t speak or write in english frequently
person a random reader
schedule August 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Sounds pretty good, keep it up