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Good chap! it looks like Xion is the monkey wrench NO ONE was expecting. Hope she can stop them once and for all.

Is that, Xion, YES! hmm perhaps veruca and the nother one is remembering xion since shhe came back to existance.

interestring can you have Xenia muttering angrily that she knows who the traitor is and knows their only one way to take care of it (Killing namine since she may have had a hand in Xion ressurection as Xion began systematically knocking out each member)

I was pretty surprised to see that this had an update after so long, so I decided to check it out. Nice chapter, and glad to see that it's not a dormant fanfic.

Wow. That sure was a surprising ending to a long-awaited chapter. I rather like the way that this appears to be going. Kairi isn't nowhere near as broken as Loshul thinks she is, especially after the encounter she had within her own heart. I wonder if she'd taken acting in school or was in some kind of drama or theatre club before she had been captured, because Kairi looks to me like a young woman (a naked young woman mind you) with a plan and not just a simple sex slave. I wonder what will happen when Kairi and Namine meet each other though. Likely there will be talk and scheming for Kairi to get out and back to the Islands, and the red-head will likely try at the start to convince Namine to come back with her, but I'm pretty sure that it will end up with steamy sex between them.

this is good can you have Xion be mentioned? btw i want to see kairi get more anal by another girl

Wow. I loved this chapter so much it is hard to describe. The dealings of the different members of the Company, their trust and distrust for one another; Kairi's internal struggle between the Light of Good and Purity, and the Darkness of Sin, Malice, and Lust. Simply astounding and a perfect additional chapter.

I wonder where the Keyblade went off to? Possibly Namine? Then again, what is going on with Namine? I hope that she will be able to resist and come back in time, and that Sora (since I am pretty sure that Sora snuck into Damian's ship) will be able to rescue them. I also have a feeling that the new girl that arrived is Selphie, but I'm only about 72% confident about that.

May the Grace of the Valar Protect You

Shire Folk

I absolutely have to say that after reading the first six chapters of your story, I want more. It's great, probably the best KH lemon story I've ever seen that would actually have a plot to it. It's both the sex and the plot that keep me going. From what I can tell, Sora has managed to stow away on Ameys' ship, and soon may be searching for Kairi. It somewhat saddens me that Kairi has now given in, and it looks as if Namine will soon be on the verge of breaking too, but it also delights me because there will now be more lemon scenes for them. The favourite line I can think of is in chapter four when Kairi thinks *Oh hell, what have I become?*

I seriously want to know how this unfolds, and I hope that you update soon.

May the Grace of the Valar Protect You

Shire Folk

P.S. I'm using my penname from the regular ff site if you want to PM me or anything.

i imagine Loshul to be angry with Veruca knowing that a bit of Kairi heart has connected to Veruca but inwardly he please since he view Veruca as a piece he can't properly control but thanks to kairi he gets two toys for the price of one

and i imagine Yvvete to at first hide Namine but a now anger Syrus demands to know where that nobody is so he can help Veruca

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This is a really good story. It's very discriptive, and the discriptions are well written. This story hasn't been updated in awhile, I hope it will be soon though! I can't wait to see what happens next.