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WoW This was really a HOt story!!! I vote that the next chapter is done on Lisa.

Pick Hitomi next

Nice. I'd like to see kasumi show up next.

I loved it even more the second time I read it and I seriously hope you add a few more chpts in the near future! I still hope that Ayane appears in chpt two, and that she undergoes some kind of body modification as a result of the lust inducing virus (such as breast expansion). If so, I would suggest you have her go horny at a beach in her skimpiest swimsuit surrounded by loads of perverted guys. The virus makes her grow so horny that she can't help sucking each and every guy off in order to ingest their cum (maybe she experinces belly growth or body inflation from being overfilled with cum as the story progresses). Hell, you could even have her and Kasumi in the same chpt when the virus hits them both...Maybe they were playing a VERY heated game of volleyball, or perhaps were about to duel before suddenly being overwhelmed by lust. How hot would that be? Ayane and Kasumi engaging in a cock sucking contest to see which of them can ingest the must cum before reaching their breaking points (and of course, they swell up as they force themselves to swallow unnaturally large loads of sperm from every guy at the beach). Its your story of course, I'm just a fan telling you what I would like to see, but in the end its all up to you, but I do hope my crazy rambling at least helps your own creative juices (good luck! I'm sure your next chpt will be even better than chpt one!)

AWESOME STORYLINE! Tina was very hot in this story and I like how you came up with the Lilium virus to explain her crazy arousal and willingness to be with the guys who injected her. ten stars! I personally would like to see you use the lilium drug on Ayane next (she's the hottest girl of all in my opinion, best figure anyway, lol). Unless of course you are planning on having her be the mastermind behind the virus, as a means of getting revenge on Kasumi (maybe Tina was a test run, lol). Nah, I bet its Zack again, lol, that perv. Anywho, I'd love to say Ayane get into this, bu look forward to whoever you choose next. Oh yeah, its your story and all, but I was thinking it would spice things up if the Lilium had other side effects besides increased lust, like maybe it causes girls to experience sudden growth in the chest and ass areas if you know what I mean? lol, breast expansion is always hot, especially when the girl is already ultra busty like Ayane. Or maybe the lilium virus turns the girls into cum hungry nymphos who can't stop drinking guys semen even when if their bodies are stuffed to the brink of bursting (mmmmm, would love to read a chpt about Ayane sucking off all the guys at a beach until her sexy, perfect ninja body which she is so proud of ends up bloated with cum). anywho, these are all just kinky suggestions, brought on by the awesomeness of your story, lol. Good luck with whatever you decide to do, and thankyou if you decide to do Ayane next or incorporate any of my naughty ideas into the story (highly recommend the BE and cum stuffing ideas)

Please completely fill Hitmoi's womb full of cum and completely saturate her in semen.

I would suggest Hitomi

Hitomi needs a good long fuck.

Well written indeed! I look forward to more. The idea of Lilium is not a new one, but it is exciting. Where's this 'Godzilla's collection of Lemons' you speak of?

I vote for Kasumi or Ayane, by the way.