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for The Legion - Lyelleth & Orannis

by silverwynd

schedule July 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hello.

I would like to first say you are a really great storyteller. As I'm reading, the words flow to the back of my mind as I imagine all the things these people are doing. Thank you for having the strength to post something so personal as this. Your grammar is excellent and your story flows. I just wish you would update more often :) I'm hanging onto every move Lyelleth and Orannis is going through. Can't wait for more. Have a good day.

Aside (70 Druid)
schedule July 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh ye gods, I love orcs. Especially if there's N/C involved. Mohahaa. Looking snazzy so far, I do hope you update soon.