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for The Legion - Lyelleth & Orannis

by silverwynd

person ileyna
schedule October 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oooo, Wonderful! You always deliver such delightful chapters! I love it because I may have a great love of night elves but I don't fancy the factions of the Alliance one bit. The Horde have such honor that I think most people don't see. Instead they look uppon them and view them as savage brutes. Your story helps to show the honor of an orc and I love it!

I apologize if I ramble, it's a fault I am well aware of! But I see you put up ThrallxJaina love and I must go read it!

And thanks for being my first Chp. 11 review! I will update soon, especially if you're going to hold out more of your wonders otherwise!

Mwah!
iley
schedule October 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
oh HERE you are! I think this is one of the first stories that I read when I first found this sight, before I even thought to have a go myself, and YOU are responsible for starting my Orc fetish! *scowls! I was so happy when I clicked on this and recognised it, are you the author who said WOW is like crack? That was my only lead to remembering where this was and I just didn't have time to re-read everything, so many good stories again! But I am STOKED that you have updated, I love the story, love the pairing, love the all but hypnotic way that you write, not to mention your creativity and origniality..."moontouched"? What a brilliant concept! I don't understand fully what it is yet, but I have no doubt that all will be revealed as you continue. I wish I could bookmark this so that I don't lose it again! Maybe I'm going to have to brave my pc illiteracy and figure out how to do that recommended reading list thing after all.... O.o. Anyway, I love it! I am simply HANGING for more! Soon, please lol. I haven't done Gruul myself yet, but I'm sure it's over-rated :P it's much much more important that you give us more of the same lol. NO, only joking...sort of... but I do eagerly await.. MORE lol
person ileyna
schedule August 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
So I love it! When will you update again? Soon I hope! Mwah!

~iley
person Mocaris
schedule August 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Loving the new chapters, and Can't wait for the more. Lovely work. :)
schedule August 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
jeebus! you really know how to leave a cliff hanger T_T now write the next one before i go insane! *threatens with the wrath of doom*
schedule August 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OH YOU EVIL... just kidding. But not really. Conspiracy, is it, eh? =) Well, like I said, you're such a major tease, truly. While apart of me wants to develop hernia due to frustration, another part relishes it. Tee hee... =)
person Mocaris
schedule August 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
A wonderful story thus far. :)
schedule August 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
You're such a tease, what a mean cliffhanger to toss at us... but at the same time, it's a very good thing. =)
person Anon
schedule August 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This is a very promising story! It is nice to read something that actually mentions ppl from the game, instead of taking place in some obscure part of Feralas. And the flow of the story is just flawless. I will look forward for more!
schedule July 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I hope that in spite of your raiding (hehe), your updates will be regular. I am really enjoying the story even though I don't know the world of WoW that well, I have friends who tell me about it but I do not play it myself. But I do know them sexy orcs, and ah, the trolls. Purr. The point is that if you keep us in suspense for long, I will throw a world-class hissy fit... =)

I am really enjoying the way you write overall. Flowing, pleasant grammar, really a treat to read.

“...And Night Elf?”

“What?”

“Prepare yourself.”


The above lines made me giggly with anticipation... mohahah.