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June 10, 2011 at 12:00 AM
o.o Please tell me you're going to finish this fanfiction! Dying to know what happens next! <3
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September 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Update soon? Ja?
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April 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
So uh, I demand an update or I will throw things. I loves these two, I want to see more,
loves,
iley
loves,
iley
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December 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh god, you MUST continue this! I love it. Leaving it on such a cliffhanger is punishment for us. :(
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December 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This story? = The Awesome. I require more.
Your writing is full, rich, and clear. You do dialog and exposition very well. Its easy to read and I connect with the characters well.
As some constructive criticism, I think you could work on action a bit more. No, not THAT kind of action, that kind is perfectly fine ;).This is mostly in reference to the start of the chapter when they go to Moonglade. It was very confusing to follow what was happening, where they were, and who was saying what. Im also not quite sure HOW they got there.... In any event, you picked right up after that confusing start so no harm done, but I just wanted to share my thoughts. :)
Your writing is full, rich, and clear. You do dialog and exposition very well. Its easy to read and I connect with the characters well.
As some constructive criticism, I think you could work on action a bit more. No, not THAT kind of action, that kind is perfectly fine ;).This is mostly in reference to the start of the chapter when they go to Moonglade. It was very confusing to follow what was happening, where they were, and who was saying what. Im also not quite sure HOW they got there.... In any event, you picked right up after that confusing start so no harm done, but I just wanted to share my thoughts. :)
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November 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This story is very good and I really like you to continue with the greatness
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November 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I like. Rockin chapter, and I can't wait for more! :D
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November 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OH GOD I LOVE YOU. Srsly. Thank you so much for dedicating that chapter to me... ahh, yum, yum. Sorry for taking so long, my presence on these internets has been scarce for quite some time. But don't think I've forgotten about this story! I've caught up on the chapters I've missed, and now I am going to read them again. And again. Mohaha!
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October 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I've gotta say, this is one kick ass story. Well done! I look forward to the next chapter. ( :
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October 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh my god! It ate my first review!
So here it is all rehashed! Argh!
:D Sorry it took me ages to review! I love this story, I hope to see more soon. (Like I should talk, I'm queen of long update breaks, eep!)
Any who, I love your work and can't wait to read more!
And ThrallxJaina?! I love the ThrallxJaina pairing! If you need incentive, um, I triple dog dare ya! ;P
I'm so flattered that you like my work!
*hug*
ileyna
So here it is all rehashed! Argh!
:D Sorry it took me ages to review! I love this story, I hope to see more soon. (Like I should talk, I'm queen of long update breaks, eep!)
Any who, I love your work and can't wait to read more!
And ThrallxJaina?! I love the ThrallxJaina pairing! If you need incentive, um, I triple dog dare ya! ;P
I'm so flattered that you like my work!
*hug*
ileyna