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September 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Nice story and chapters so far mate. I read alot of stories on this site but your's is the 1st im reviewing lol Can't wait to read more chapters, the 1st was awsome. The 2nd, ain't that bad, bit short but good but I understand your reason. I'll be reviewing each chatper now lol Keep up the great work on this sweet story. Can't wait for chapter 3 and on.
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September 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
WOW! good job. probably the best Kingdom Hearts fanfic I've read. Not many mistakes. Maybe one grammatical error. I am definetly going to tell my friends about this story. Keep up the work. Psychoz
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September 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
great follow up, i see this going places! lol. anyways, i had a good idea for a later chappie: you know that part in hollow bastion when you defeat riku the second time (i think) and the princesses with worlds u didn't visit meet you? well...use ur imagination
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September 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really enjoyed this. It is hard to find a Sora/Female fic anymore. Although I like Sora/Kairi/Riku ones too. But seriously, keep up the good work.
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September 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Nice Reward ~winks~ i like this chapter it was very well rounded nice details as well and the fluidity of the story HOT!
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September 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Bravo again ... i think maybe a bit more of them exploring the different feelings of a untuched body would have added to it but it was great the way it is to i wasn't a fan and now i have to check out the games and everything LOL
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September 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Nice!
I guess what happens in the Disney worlds,STAYS in the Disney worlds!
I guess what happens in the Disney worlds,STAYS in the Disney worlds!
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September 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
dude, awesome story, keep it up, i like how it is so far. next time, how about ariel?
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September 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I Wrote A Story Similar To This One, Called "Sora The Player" Only It Fetured Yaoi As Well As Hentai. I Thought This Was A Well Written Story It Has Inspired Me To Add More Chapters To My Story. Seeing As The Second Game Is Out Sora's Days Of Getting Laid Are Far From Over Which Means I've Got Myself More Story Lines. Oh And I Think Yuffie Should Be The Next To Be With Sora Aridith Said Something I Didnt Like In The 2nd Game So I Dislike Her Now and I Tend To Bash Her Sometimes. I Know Im Rambling Anyway Great Fic.
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September 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I have to say, at first I thougrht I woldn't like this. After reading it though, it's actually very good. It's good to see something original every once in awhile. Other than some grammatical errors and such, this story was pretty awesome.
For the next chapter, I would say a threesome with Yuffie and Aerith, but if you have to pick one, go with Yuffie. I've always been a Yuffie fangirl.
For the next chapter, I would say a threesome with Yuffie and Aerith, but if you have to pick one, go with Yuffie. I've always been a Yuffie fangirl.