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December 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
when you gonna continue? I cant wait to see sally.
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November 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Finally, a kingdom hearts fanfic that isn't Yaoi. ;)
but you use waaaaay too many of the same words. You used as much too many times, and in places you didn't need to.
but you use waaaaay too many of the same words. You used as much too many times, and in places you didn't need to.
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October 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Well i just found this story while looking and i have to say it is quite amazing. I am sorry to hear about your fiance, i hope things go ok. Anyway, i can't wait to see this story continued. I would definatly consider heading into Kingdom Hearts 2 territory, considering there is not only more women but more information to use in writing. Unfortunatly since i haven't played the first one in awhile...i can't really vote on the next girl. As for Aerith getting pregnant...sure why not, i mean it is fiction...fun to read. One thing i've noticed is that the girls seem urgently in need for sora...which isn't a bad thing, i would like to suggest trying a more aggressive sora with someone who isn't dying to touch him, basically switching around...sora the one in control, and the girl the one who 1.) trying to get over shock, and 2.) Deciding to play long...basically a switch of chapter one. And adding some bondage wouldn't be a horrible thing, but either way i look forward to another chapter.
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October 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
please continue this fic there needs to be more Sora/female fic on this site. i have to say you got some intresting ideas here, i always did think Aerith/Aeris would make a good mother. maybe later on you could have a chapter with Larxene/Sora. i dont know how your gonna get the next chapter to work though i mean shes a mermaid right? i don't think they do... that, or were you gonna have some magic thing happen, or are gonna be weird(i mean in that in a good way mind you) and have her and Sora do ...that SPAWNing thing that fish do?LOL
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October 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Do Ariel next, please. Or Sally in Halloween Town (but that'd be sorta weird). Do you think you could also do people from Chain of Memories and Kingdom Hearts 2?
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October 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Sorry to hear about that. But this fic is awsome so far.
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September 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
nice work keep it up
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September 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Another great chapter. Very well written.
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September 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I've talked to Zanku and he told me to tell everyone that he's sorry for the delay, and he'll be posting another chapter in a few days.
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September 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This is a really great story. I look forward to more.