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August 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
You know,in the many pages of fanfics I have to trudge through, this is the first Sora centric story I read that doesn't suck at all.
It's verry good! Only thing would be to grammer check your chapters a bit more, as far as sentance structure goes. (A good beta reader could help you there.)
But that's not such a big problem. This thing is overwhelmingly good, I say.
It's verry good! Only thing would be to grammer check your chapters a bit more, as far as sentance structure goes. (A good beta reader could help you there.)
But that's not such a big problem. This thing is overwhelmingly good, I say.
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December 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Well, I think that Nightmare could be a very...intresting chapter. What I really can't wait to see is when Sora goes to Hallow Bastion the second time. I mean six (five if Belle is off with the Beast) women, all alone with a horny boy in a castle. That's just about the only time in KH1 that Sora would be able to "have fun" with Jassmine, since as you stated before, she was taken off her home world before anything could happen. Also, Sora will have to have Aerial teach him how to make love under water...
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September 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I absolutely love this story and hope you eventually start to write it again. I also vote to have Aerith become pregnant.
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August 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I read your profile and I'd love to bounce idea's back and forth with you. E-mail me at Heyashleyjude@AOL.com
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August 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
NONONONONONONONO! No nightmare! (brings out spray bottle) bad author! (squirts) Go with wendy, then do kairi. and aerith should not get preg. it would crush kairi. tell me, are you going to do the gullwongs, yuna, rikku and paine?
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August 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i think all this disscusion over Aerith is pointless. her having a kid with sora is the is what you decided to do, so go with it. stop voting over it already!
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August 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Nightmare Before Christmas amv
http://www.veoh.com/videos/v654018Hmf8YwtP?searchId=2834543354307067996&rank=0
Posted only because it's so fucking funny
With Love, Imasuky Lomae
http://www.veoh.com/videos/v654018Hmf8YwtP?searchId=2834543354307067996&rank=0
Posted only because it's so fucking funny
With Love, Imasuky Lomae
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August 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I'll most likely hate myself for this but I vote Nightmare before Christmas.
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August 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
and yet nobody has thought to mention Larxene?
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August 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I think when you do Hallow Bastion you should write a lemon for the other six Princesses other then Kairi.
Is there going to be a part 2, you know for KHII? Becuase if you do you should start with Roxas and Namine. And when you get to the Hallow Bastion, you should have a Sora/Tifa/Yuffie/Aerith one!
Super so far!
Can't wait for more
Don't do Nightmare, that's technically nercorphillia. And that's wrong in many ways.
But go ahead with Wendy
Is there going to be a part 2, you know for KHII? Becuase if you do you should start with Roxas and Namine. And when you get to the Hallow Bastion, you should have a Sora/Tifa/Yuffie/Aerith one!
Super so far!
Can't wait for more
Don't do Nightmare, that's technically nercorphillia. And that's wrong in many ways.
But go ahead with Wendy